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08/16/23

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Third Place

Contest by La Constance France

‘ Over dose of Whisky can change sense of orientation in usual movement , zigzag turning straight and straight turning zigzag.’ - Poet Zigzag Zigzag path slipped on snow by sneaking snake, whether fast or slow. Yeti stepped straight. Next both relished overdose of whisky. To follow zigzag path, smake had to hate. It ran fast straight without break. Yeti ran zigzag, yet steps at stake Movement of both went risky.

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Date: 8/18/2023 7:48:00 PM
Great rhyme. Congratulations!
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Date: 8/16/2023 7:12:00 AM
A fun one.
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