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Zephyr's Kiss

Golden soft was the light that swiftly flew, As whistling rain pelted majestic oaks And the soaked birds began to cry for you As Nature silently wrapped up its cloaks Thirsty for coming dawn, so bold and new. Silver Maples fluttered in the wind, Where the fast sleeping rabbits hid away All beautiful, we wish to never end With brightened colors, every joyful day As Nature's beauty flowed out to transcend. Blazing red the delicate maple stands Gently kissed by Zephyr's uplifting breeze As frost comes touching each leaf with cold hands During night's darkest hour leaves damp to freeze A deep pain felt by one who understands Ginko's golden hair full of color fair Tossed about by the nor'easter force Weeps to sympathize with Maple's affair Soon ribbons snatched, hair detached a worse course Winter blows with ice and cold incomparable Robert Lindley & Sara Kendrick

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/6/2015 12:36:00 PM
Absolutely "brilliant venting" with glowing, colorful verses, my very talented friend! Made the poem IMHO...
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/6/2015 4:28:00 PM
Not sure what IMHO is..LOL..Thanks for dropping by again..Sara
Date: 12/1/2015 7:15:00 PM
Always a pleasure to write with you my friend. Your second half gave this poem the color and spirit that it needed. I knew you would come thru with awesome verses! And you did that and then some. Next collab poem is on the way later tonight or tomorrow. This time I want 16 opening verses to my presented 16 ending verses. Subject is Romance.
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Date: 12/1/2015 3:22:00 PM
this is very nice. I love the pattern of it too, how you inserted the one liners in between the stanzas. Oh, I see you did this with Robert. It definitely has his lovely touch!!
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Date: 12/1/2015 8:59:00 AM
Top notch writing and imagery Sara!
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Date: 12/1/2015 8:08:00 AM
Here it is summers first eve, but this poem blows through me, and chills my bones. Nicely penned.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/1/2015 8:27:00 AM
I hope that it didn't chill you too much..We are about 20 days away from the first day of winter here with nice fallist weather..It may rain today and tonight with cooler temps for a few days following..It is cloudy out there now..Sara
Date: 11/30/2015 7:37:00 PM
Very evocative discription of the trees Sara. Light & Love
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/1/2015 5:17:00 AM
Those trees just have a personality all their own..SK
Date: 11/30/2015 11:00:00 AM
Hi Sara, WOW, love the romantic spell winter has on this poem. CHilling at its best. Love SKAT
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/1/2015 5:16:00 AM
It does denote that there is going to be a chill this winter..Thanks for the visit..SK..
Date: 11/30/2015 7:40:00 AM
My friend was a pleasure collaborating with you on this poem. Your verses made it an excellent piece! Quite proud of the finished work!
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Robert Lindley
Date: 12/6/2015 12:35:00 PM
Absolutely "brilliant venting" with glowing, colorful verses, my very talented friend! Made the poem IMHO...
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/1/2015 5:15:00 AM
Your beginning lines inspired me to vent some feelings..Thanks for the inspiration..SK
Date: 11/29/2015 6:26:00 PM
amazing imagery, Sara a blessing to read. LINDA
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/1/2015 5:14:00 AM
Thanks for dropping by..I am glad that you received a blessing..SK

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