Zenith

When sun whispers goodnight to crimson skies,                                                                                                                                                                                                                  
and clouds turn from lavender to soft grey
sun glides away to shine in others' eyes
zenith is sun's place to herald each day.

Sun god Helios rode from east to west
pausing in zenith to admire his throng.
Then hurried on, as day's movement was best
and, somewhere, summer days wished to be long.

Coming from Arabic, zenith now means
“highest point,” roughly, where Sun sits at noon
Sun never quite relinquishes its gleams
when viewed as opposite, lights a full moon.

Earth revolves and to Zenith sun rises
Sun stirs golden rays with a gilded spoon
Once a day, even when cloud disguises,
sun is at zenith, then races with moon.

May 13, 2023
for "Word Challenge--Z Words"
by Constance La France
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Dietrich Avatar
May 18, 2023 at 4:33 PM
You are coming up with some pretty great poems . Keep up the golden pen, Ann
Kendrick Avatar
May 15, 2023 at 6:34 AM
Congrats on your winning work in Constance's contest. Way to go. Sara
La France Avatar
May 15, 2023 at 4:54 AM
Ann, thank you so much for sharing your wonderful poem with us in my Writing Challenge, congratulations !
Congratulations on your win in the Contest...ANN
George Avatar
May 14, 2023 at 8:50 AM
Beautiful poem with striking imagery ! Yes, the sun is at its zenith during noon. Congratulations dear Ann on your win.
Fowler Avatar
May 14, 2023 at 8:15 AM
Nicely done Ann. Congratulations on your win! :)
Poet Avatar
May 14, 2023 at 4:37 AM
Beautifully written; your imagery is superb. Enjoyed it. Best of luck in the contest!
Buhagiar Avatar
May 14, 2023 at 1:35 AM
Your poetry is at its zenith.
Wolf Avatar
May 13, 2023 at 8:16 PM
Zis iz exztremely zenzational! ~ gw
Mcintosh Avatar
May 13, 2023 at 6:54 PM
Lovely writing. I enjoyed. I did the same word :) but not the same work, God bless you always. Love, Gina
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