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Reaction to disdain Appears in our cognition We as soul, immune from pain Wonder at writhing ego's rendition Meanings assigned, outcomes desired Anchors, fetters, cause of tension Futile thoughts by ego sired Seeking our attention 24-October-2022

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Date: 10/27/2022 8:20:00 AM
We must release the tension as soon as we feel its presence, it will build and can be very harmful if held in. Wise words my friend, Unseeking Seeker. Bill
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Date: 10/27/2022 8:49:00 AM
True. The problem is Tamas or stupor. Our awareness drops.
Date: 10/24/2022 6:37:00 PM
Are you familiar with the Shrek movie series... Donkey jumping up and down saying 'Pick me, pick me, pick me' that's my pesky ego :-)
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Date: 10/24/2022 6:51:00 PM
Recognising ego’s guile we may yet indulge it awhile with a playful smile
Date: 10/24/2022 8:14:00 AM
For sure, tension can consume our thoughts and take our attention. Nicely done.
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Date: 10/24/2022 8:43:00 AM
Consume us … yes, if we indulge
Date: 10/24/2022 8:01:00 AM
Creative work you have penned. Thanks for sharing. Sara
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Date: 10/24/2022 8:42:00 AM
Thank you, Sara :)
Date: 10/24/2022 5:00:00 AM
Seeker, that is cool fine job. It flows. Keep Rolling. H
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Date: 10/24/2022 5:04:00 AM
Thank you, Elless

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