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Zebra At the River

distinct call of zebras, to another, a warning, not to move any further! a long snort with a few more neighing sounds, as they cross Mara between sandy mounds. passing across the river from Kenya, to vast green pastures of Tanzania. migration has to be made twice a year, survival the key, starvation the fear! understand nature. with it God’s puzzle! the choices to be made in life’s struggle! hundreds in a dash across the river, air resonates with fright, voices quiver! their fate is to swim a few feet across, escaping sharp crocodilian jaws, with wild lions on rampage, leopards on prowl, zebras of all ages, mothers with young foal! in their struggle to survive against odds, their emotional upheaval strikes chord, with people who face similar events, of loss or gain, in challenging moments, yet the journey has to be made for sure, against chances of fate, prayer a cure, threat to zebras are savages with teeth, striking from bushes or from underneath, enemies of man may not look like beasts, devils dressed in kindness, their words are sweet, in crossing life’s river wisdom is key, prayers and experience with which to see. 2nd Placement written 5th December 2021 10 syllables each line Zebra - “Z” poetry contest Constance La France sponsored

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Date: 12/11/2021 2:41:00 PM
Krish, congratulations on your Second Place win in my "Z" Contest. Wonderfully penned ~ peace and tranquility _ Constance
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 12/11/2021 3:06:00 PM
Thanks constance!:)
Date: 12/9/2021 11:04:00 AM
Wonderful metaphoric write Krish. I saw a program about this very event. On the one hand it brought me such a felling of sadness. On the other hand relief for those who make it to the other side of the river. You have brought this challenge to life as you overlaid it on life itself! Congratulations on your win. Blessings!
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 12/9/2021 3:08:00 PM
Thanks Sam! Delighted to have your visit. I was witness to this migration and that was education! Why not build a bridge, I asked- but then it would destroy the ecology!! Life is so complex!!
Date: 12/8/2021 4:58:00 PM
Enjoyed the story of the Zebras, shame of the dangers in their life like so many other animals. Congratulations on your win in Constance’s contest. Hugs and lots of Love Eve
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 12/8/2021 6:23:00 PM
Thanks Eve. A cruel choice in life! hunger and death. Thanks for your kind words!
Date: 12/8/2021 8:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a creative story/write. I am there with the animals. The zebras come in white and have been hand painted by God. Have a blessed day...................
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 12/8/2021 8:44:00 AM
Thanks Paula! I like the idea of hand painted Zebras! God’s painting cannot be erased!
Date: 12/5/2021 9:51:00 AM
An incredible metaphor, Krish. I thoroughly enjoyed reading about the migration of the zebra. It brought back memories of our safari in Tanzania. We found the Tanzanian people to be so warm, welcoming, and wonderful. The zebra are so stately. Good writing!
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 12/5/2021 11:10:00 AM
Thanks my friend! good to hear from you.:)
Date: 12/5/2021 6:38:00 AM
Have seen the migration on tv, you captured it well Krish. Would love to see it in real life. Good luck in the contest. Hope you're keeping well. Tom
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 12/5/2021 8:08:00 AM
Thanks Tom! I would recommend a trip! Fly to Nairobi and take a flight to Masai Mara! hire a guide tour!! 3 exhilarating days! Was there in 2016.
Date: 12/5/2021 6:13:00 AM
Enjoyed the poem, and learned about Zebra-life - "migration has to be made twice a year, survival the key, starvation the fear!" Best wishes ~ Mala
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Date: 12/5/2021 8:07:00 AM
Thanks Mala! Always a pleasure to hear from you! I was at the crossing a few years back- could clearly see a pattern to their sounds- like a language they have to tell of danger! One of the most inspiring moments in life!

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