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Zahra

Zahra was a woman and erotically lovely
Youthful, beautiful and passionate
Xanadu, an ice mountain paradise was her existence
Where she lived with her lover, a
Vampire, two hundred years un-dead
Utterly intoxicating was this man
Together they dwelled in bliss
Sublime and spiritual was their lovemaking
Rapturous murmurs of forever life his promise 
Quivering, she whispered her deep love
Possession and control was his 
Often he left their paradise to hunt
Never-failing to find the red blood they drank
Moments of madness haunted her
Leaving her life behind was her sadness
Kissing him always calmed her dead heart
Just before dawn they climbed inside an ornate coffin
Intertwined in each other arms  
Hypnotic was his hold on beautiful Zahra
Gentle his cold touch
Flawless was their un-dead existence
Entrancing and ethereal is how she perceived him 
Divine and desirable she could not resist
Charming her was easy for this dark un-dead man
Bedazzling her with whispered words and promises
And keeping her, his love prisoner . . .

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September 30, 2015

Poetry/Reverse ABC/Zahra
Copyright Protected, ID 15-713-514-0


For the contest, First Ever ZYX, 
sponsor, John Lawless

4th Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Roper Avatar
October 16, 2015 at 2:50 PM
Wow!! This one is wonderful. Congratulations on your win a 7!!!
A  Avatar
October 15, 2015 at 9:47 PM
Broken, Nice to see you on John's winning list. Congratulations on your win. ** Love SKAT
A. Sharma Avatar
October 15, 2015 at 1:52 AM
Congrats on superb win broken with this wonderful write!
Allison Avatar
October 15, 2015 at 1:23 AM
WOW! many congrats on your win:-)hugs Jan xx
Tor Avatar
October 15, 2015 at 12:50 AM
Constance nice win!!!!
Y. Avatar
October 14, 2015 at 9:51 PM
BW, I'm glad to see you standing on the winner's podium with this write. I enjoyed it when I first saw it and I enjoy it now. Congratulations on your winning write it was well deserved:-)Alexis 7
Lawless Avatar
October 14, 2015 at 7:27 PM
AH, BW, the dark side of "forever" love. Nice take on the zyx contest. Thanks for taking the time to tip-toe through the consonants and vowels.
Martin Avatar
October 2, 2015 at 1:18 PM
Scary but hypnotic! Your expression holds rthe reader!
Dietrich Avatar
October 1, 2015 at 4:02 PM
Forever a love prisoner. With the right person, this could be amazing!! Very nicely done, Constance.
Curtis Avatar
October 1, 2015 at 3:51 PM
Boy, You can write !!!
Andresen Avatar
October 1, 2015 at 1:40 PM
- Hot and beautifully bloody love relationship :) - A wonderful poem, B.W. ! - I wish you good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Inman Avatar
October 1, 2015 at 11:13 AM
Great write, BW. Flows beautifully, without looking you wouldn't notice it was an ABC.
Boddie Avatar
October 1, 2015 at 9:49 AM
this write about the blood sucker....well its that muhf*****....and please forgive me for the French....but your words are always so intense....;)
Cheema Avatar
October 1, 2015 at 8:01 AM
Kept me spellbound! Good luck wings!
Y. Avatar
October 1, 2015 at 7:31 AM
Wow! BW, you did good job in penning the abcs' in reverse. I enjoyed the flow. Great imagery. This is such a fascinating tale.Best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis 7
A   Avatar
September 30, 2015 at 10:00 PM
This is a wonderful entry Broken, John will enjoy and be dazzled by your poem.. LINDA
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