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Yummy In My Tummy-Nursery Rhyme

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Little Lucy Lou is a pink unicorn, She loves to sing and blow the horn. She’s not feeling well; she’s so blue, Lucy Lou has a touch of the flu. Mommy unicorn made her soup. So she could feel better and regroup. The soup felt warm in her tummy, To her surprise, the soup was yummy. Content: Nursery Rhyme 2 Sponsor: Eve Roper

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Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 3/24/2021 2:36:00 AM

This is too cute Alexis... Loved it... Congrats on your win... Hugs... ~ Ani

Eve Roper

Date: 3/20/2021 6:28:00 AM

Hello Alexa, loved your poem would’ve been a first place but you forgot to put a date on it. Hugs Eve

Alexis Y.
Date: 3/22/2021 6:51:00 AM

Hi Eve, Thanks for letting me know that. I had no clue that I didn't put the date on it. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/17/2021 1:06:00 PM

Cute as can be, Alexis and you used brevity, which I sure needed more of with mine!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/17/2021 2:16:00 AM

The pure sweetness of this, and the fact that children will love it should take it to the winner's circle.

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 3/15/2021 4:34:00 PM

That’s a lovey nursery rhyme Alexis, surely a winner to me. Belle :-)

Judy Ball

Date: 3/15/2021 3:05:00 PM

Excellent nursery rhyme Alexis.\ Loved it. Really good imagery throughout. God Bless, JB

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/15/2021 2:29:00 PM

Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. I like nursery rhymes. Sara

Jack Horne

Date: 3/15/2021 1:51:00 PM

a really lovely entry for the contest, my friend

Jan Allison

Date: 3/15/2021 12:14:00 PM

such a sweet poem Alexis:-) hugs Jan xx

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 3/15/2021 11:41:00 AM

This rhyme provides such a delightful excursion into fantasy, one that any child would love. Good luck in the contest, with this impressive entry. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/15/2021 11:20:00 AM

- Sweet ... nursery rhyme, Alexis :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Robert Pettit

Date: 3/15/2021 11:12:00 AM

Eve should like this one because I like it. Good luck in the contest.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/15/2021 10:39:00 AM

This is cute, I like your take on the contest. Now Lucie Lou won’t be blue and will have an Oopsie Woopsie Rainbow Poopsie. Sorry I couldn’t resist! The Leprechaun made me do it. ;0)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/15/2021 10:10:00 AM

Oh I loved your nursery rhyme. Excellent.