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You're the 1-4 Me

Sitting on a lonely beach Staring out to sea Dreaming of two people One of them is me The other is a bluebird And she's the cat's meow Waiting for that someday I wish it could be now

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Yann Rolland

Date: 3/6/2023 6:03:00 PM

very nice, i like company of birds yann

Andres Luis Bigote
Date: 3/6/2023 8:09:00 PM

Thank you very much

Michael Craig

Date: 3/6/2023 9:49:00 AM

This poem as well as the others I have read of yours's are quite good short and to the point. The way a poem should be.

Andres Luis Bigote
Date: 3/6/2023 8:08:00 PM

Thank you