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‘Your wish is my command’ he said it just as any woman in love might want to hear He said it like he was evening some score somehow leveling the playing field but said like he might really mean it some day He said it like he was divulging some deep secret that might otherwise never see the light of day yet here was one step closer to a goal or destination He said it loud and deliberate so I could not misinterpret or pretend I did not hear ‘Your wish is my command’, he said so I’d know that somewhere below the surface he meant it to some degree I knew he liked the gallantry of it and might even want it be true so I took the gift as it drifted onto shore Lone and castaway, a care package of sorts I didn’t know what I might do with it but I gathered it under my wing and offered it a home within my heart posted on September 24, 2022

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Date: 9/24/2022 9:36:00 PM
So interesting, Line. Reminded me of the awesome genie movie I just saw: 3,000 years of Longing!
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Date: 9/25/2022 9:18:00 AM
I'll just have to look up that movie, Andrea ~
Date: 9/24/2022 9:32:00 PM
This is soooooo real, Line. I love where you went with his profession of obeisance as well. Touche! ~ Gershon
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Date: 9/25/2022 9:19:00 AM
Thank you very much, Gershon, for your most appreciated visit and comment ~
Date: 9/24/2022 6:00:00 PM
Enjoyed this to read, love the ending Line, offered a home within my heart. Let us hope for the best...
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Date: 9/24/2022 8:12:00 PM
Thank you so much, Michael. Most appreciated ~
Date: 9/24/2022 10:53:00 AM
A wonderful thoughtful write. How true the innocent present gifts, not quite tested. I was on youtube and happened to spy and watch an interview on Arsenio Hall show - Kurt Cameron as he was just engaged to be married. I think oh how much he has learned as all of us have with time. Still we admire those new fresh faces with stars in their eyes.
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Date: 9/24/2022 8:12:00 PM
Absolutely, Kim. Have a lovely day ~

Book: Shattered Sighs