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Author's Notes:  This poem, "Your Warmest Embrace My Love," was written as a Japanese "Choka" (or long poem), rendered in alternating five- and seven-syllable lines, and in this instance, concluding with an extra seven-syllable line.  A Choka is characteristically "unrhymed."  I could have approached my theme using any number of verse and poetic styles, but in the end, I opted to go with the Choka format.  The message of "Your Warmest Embrace My Love" is quite clear and enjoyable.  I hope you'll find this work of interest!!  (Gary Bateman - January 9, 2015) (Choka)     

Categories:  allegory, emotions, feelings, happiness, imagery, longing, and love.

Syllable Grouping:  577|577|577|577|577|577|577|5777 = 159 Syllables; Total Lines = 25; Total Words = 119 

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I treasure ever, Your warmest embrace my love. It captivates my soul pure! I see your dear look— Mesmerized by your presence. Your touch is so rapturous! I taste your warm lips, Luscious and most inviting. They excite my passion so! I love so your smile, So pure, cheerful, radiant. It fascinates me always! Your touch is magic; Your presence stirs my passion; Our emotions now on fire! Our bodies meet pure; They unite one locked in love; Sublime ecstasy complete! Our love is now one, And our shared passion is true. Our destiny is now one! So as I write this My Sweet—I think of you now, And our love so wonderful— Your warmest embrace My Love! Gary Bateman, Copyright © All Rights Reserved (January 9, 2015)(Choka)

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Date: 1/12/2015 2:50:00 PM
Thanks Liam. This Choka was very interesting to put together. I plan to do more of these. I'm glad you enjoyed this one!! Talk to you soon. Best!! Gary
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Date: 1/12/2015 7:26:00 AM
excellent pen gary dear pal love how you drew this powerful romantic piece dances with the magic beautifully
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Gary Bateman
Date: 1/12/2015 2:58:00 PM
Thanks Liam. This Choka was very interesting to put together. I plan to do more of these. I'm glad you enjoyed this one!! Talk to you soon. Best!! Gary
Date: 1/10/2015 5:26:00 PM
Your poem really delivers what the title promises. It's a warm embrace!!!
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Gary Bateman
Date: 1/11/2015 9:50:00 AM
Andrea!! Thanks for your read and wonderful comment. Continued best wishes for the New Year!! Cheers, Gary
Date: 1/10/2015 2:05:00 AM
Hi Gary! Dazzling choka necklace of flawless radiant white pearls! A very romantic and beautiful piece you've composed here my dearest friend Gary. truly a golden pen! I enjoyed immensely! A very dreamy tender and passionate love poem! I just love it! A 7 +++ from me! I wish you all the best in 2015! Have a wonderful weekend! :) Love and hugs! oxxoxxox D."
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Date: 1/10/2015 12:57:00 PM
Hello "D"!! You are the one who's so dazzling with your Love Poems; therefore, I always take what you say with the greatest of compliment. Thanks for the super 7 rating. (This was actually the first Choka I've written and it was much fun to put together.) I have so many more forms to experiment with, but it all takes time to practice and learn (as you know for sure). Continued Best Wishes for 2015 and keep your love poems coming. Your pen too is quite magical and majestic too!! Best Always!! Gary
Date: 1/9/2015 1:46:00 PM
Romanticism that permeates the heart to the degree of making a woman falling in love! Lucky you, mein guter freund, Gary! Tremendous work!
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Date: 1/9/2015 3:27:00 PM
Demetrios!! Thanks for your visit and read here. I always appreciate your comments and insights very much!! I am please you liked this Choka. Best Wishes again for the New Year -- and I will be in touch!! Best Always, Gary

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