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Your Tears Were Just Too Heavy

Your tears were just too heavy I could not catch them all, I'm sorry that I missed so many and had to let them fall. I was powerless to help you, by your side I could but stand, a silent witness to your fears; and I could only hold your hand. Although I tried to save you, into darkness you still tumbled; with only me to watch you as to your knees you stumbled. I could not chase your demons, your pain not take from you, I just had to stand by guarding and pray you made it through. It hurt to see you battle, your fears were just so many, I'm sorry if I failed you; your tears were just too heavy. This was inspired by a couple of great pieces that I've read recently. No plagiarism intended :)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/2/2013 12:53:00 PM
"Heavy Tears"...what AWESOME imagery! What more needs to be said other than thanks for commenting on my poem "Some Times before Slumber." U were the first to weigh in on it and I thank you dearly for that): Hope to read more of yer lovely stuff as time permits. Peace, Terry
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Date: 1/17/2012 2:03:00 PM
I like this a LOT! daver
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Date: 1/16/2012 8:35:00 AM
there are many wonderful poets here on soup, you are one of them, when time permits i hope to read more of yours. harry
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Date: 1/16/2012 6:26:00 AM
Truly amazing! Beautifully written:)
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Date: 1/14/2012 1:50:00 PM
Emma you are a brilliant poet,sad but wery well written. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 1/13/2012 5:52:00 PM
Intense title, intense lines. Damn.
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Date: 1/13/2012 3:04:00 PM
All the pieces of this poetic puzzle fit together nicely. This is an impressive presentation, Emma.
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Date: 1/13/2012 2:37:00 PM
Enjoyed this sad poem. Elizabeth
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