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07.07.2023

Anne-Lise Andresen
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- No 1228 - Poetry Contest -
Sponsored by: Brian Strand

1st place in the contest

Premiere Contest Winner- Your Summer Favourite -

                                                            /
                                                        *//
                                                  ( ### )
                                             (Thirty degrees )
                                     (in the shade * not *#*))
                                  (complaining, offers you a flavor )  )
                               (from my freezer ##chocolate, vanilla,)
                         (( strawberry or raspberry () pick your favorite )
                               () with a mouth full of ice cream # ()
                                 //cooling and delicious // OOOOOOO
                                  \\ in the stomach ## your smile    O
                                      // has become much wider ))      O
                                       \  #############    /          O
                                        \           yummy            /          OO
                                          \   ##########    /             O
                                           \    ########     /                  
                                             \       time          /
                                              \    ######   /
                                                 ########
                                                  #######
                                                    OOOOO
                                                      ###
                                                         *
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Legros Kelley Avatar
July 15, 2023 at 3:05 PM
Wow, amazing!! Thia is so perfectly cool!! I can certainly see why this is a trophy placed poem! Your works would be so adorable in a children's book of concrete poems Anne-Lise!! I would buy the book for my grandbabies with such absolute adorable works in it such as this!! I love this and am putting it in my freezer...I mean my favorites!! <3 <3 <3
Larcs Avatar
July 15, 2023 at 4:17 AM
brilliantly conceived and constructed well done
Ray Choudhury Avatar
July 14, 2023 at 4:30 PM
Wow! How did I miss this stunning Shape Poem? This really deserves a trophy! Huge Congratulations! Anne-Lise, I really want to learn how to create a shape poem! Can you give me some suggestions? Love ~ Mala
Mcintosh Avatar
July 14, 2023 at 1:40 AM
Lovely. Congrats and God bless you, Love, Gina
Buehler Avatar
July 13, 2023 at 3:17 PM
An elegant and masterful presentation, Anne-Lise. Congratulations on your trophy win. A fave for me! :)
George Avatar
July 12, 2023 at 8:38 PM
Yummy and cool ! Congratulations Anne on your well deserved trophy win. Indeed so very creative ! Hugs :)
Anaya Avatar
July 12, 2023 at 9:47 AM
Congratulations on your trophy win Anne-Lise! To share ice cream with your friends is a grand time, like I'm having right now with your digital art display. It blew me away! xhugsx
Gilmour Avatar
July 11, 2023 at 1:51 PM
Wow Anne-Lise congratulations on your wonderful shape and amazing verse - truly a top winner. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Volumes Avatar
July 11, 2023 at 10:19 AM
Back with sincere congratulations on your brilliant work of art's first place win.
Poet Avatar
July 11, 2023 at 9:15 AM
Congratulations on your top win, Anne Lise, I will be away for the next 2 weeks, on vacation: thanks
Dutta Avatar
July 11, 2023 at 9:04 AM
Big CONGRATS to win TOP Love
Brul Avatar
July 11, 2023 at 8:55 AM
A mouth-watering treat for this summer. Congratulations on your trophy win Anne Lise.
Volumes Avatar
July 11, 2023 at 12:49 AM
Wonderful shape Anne-Lise. So clever.
Kendrick Avatar
July 10, 2023 at 5:11 AM
How creative a work is this one_massively creative. Thanks for sharing this shape poem with us. Reads like a good contender if for a contest. I appreciate your visit to my page. Sara
Goldsmith Avatar
July 9, 2023 at 12:27 PM
A fun/creative/shape/picture write. Love It. Not sure but maybe you have tooooo much time on your hands. Hahaha. Now I want some of your ice cream. Hugs... Have a fun day eating away.........
DiMino Avatar
July 9, 2023 at 2:22 AM
Love it! 118 in my front yard yesterday. Watermelon all day! Blessings my friend. Genius!
Kitchin Avatar
July 8, 2023 at 7:23 PM
Anne-Lise, a wonderfully creative poem.
Buhagiar Avatar
July 7, 2023 at 10:28 PM
Ice-cream! I'd die for it. Thank you, dear Anne Lise. You made my day, shape and poem.
Sambourne Avatar
July 7, 2023 at 9:59 PM
Scrumptious! Ice cream + summer melt together. What a creative posting - art + poetry. Congratulations! Brian
Parker Avatar
July 7, 2023 at 4:45 PM
the older I get the more ice cream I eat, what have I got to lose at 72
Poet Avatar
July 7, 2023 at 12:37 PM
Anne-Lise, your creation is a remarkable display of creativity. The subject matter, complemented by meticulously chosen words, exhibits an exceptional level of discernment. GL
Andresen Avatar
July 7, 2023 at 12:41 PM
- Thank you Las, that was a lovely comment :) - hugs
Narain Avatar
July 7, 2023 at 11:29 AM
Nice reminder on a warm summer day, For some reason, I eat ice cream in night only, summer or winter, it does not matter. Nice digital art.
Andresen Avatar
July 7, 2023 at 12:44 PM
- I also eat ice cream in the evening/night ... in the sun it melts and drips ... it gets sticky ... thanks for your comment, Jay :) - hugs
Allison Avatar
July 7, 2023 at 8:13 AM
amazingly creative Anne-Lise all i want now is ice cream!!! hugs Jan xx
Andresen Avatar
July 7, 2023 at 12:45 PM
- I have several in my freezer ... saving one for you, Jan :) - Thanks for your comment :) - hugs
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