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Your Sensuous Sun

Is it for the fear of again being hurt That you treat aspiring suitors like dirt? If this be the case, then you should rethink Your opinion on this, for you're on the brink Of a grievous error without possible reverse, By killing hope in a world where luck's sparse. Many other lasses pray for this luck But their hopes and stars are stuck, They look east and turn south in wait For some love-seeking men to give a date, Yet all these you've received every day And trashed all of them into the litter tray. The dew of beauty now settles on your skin, Your lustrous smile invites the urge of sin But nothing unchanging remains save change, Your sensuous sun grows in slow varying range, And soon shall evaporate the glittering dew That makes you rule both Gentile and Jew. Such suns have existed before, Yet all shortly shine and go.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/9/2021 4:15:00 PM
this was very like a sonnet in some respects. I really like this one where you use more modern and plain language. This was GREAT!
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Hannington Mumo
Date: 7/13/2021 1:33:00 PM
Wow! I marvel at these totteringly dainty lines, too...inked 6 years ago - nostalgically portraying slightly different dictional propensities and philosophical depths. I'm especially grateful you chose to look at something published such a long while ago - availing the chance to revisit previous compositions, something I pretty rarely do. Thanks a bunch, Andrea!
Date: 7/20/2015 11:02:00 AM
Beauty does dry up and fade away, and those who play with hearts risk having nothing in the end.
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Hannington Mumo
Date: 7/20/2015 11:16:00 AM
Very true...Thanks a lot.
Date: 7/17/2015 11:15:00 PM
I enjoyed this complex poem. I had to read it twice to make sure I understood it. Beautiful, thought provoking and excellent. A definite a 7.
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