Home » Poems » Eileen Manassian » Your Seductress Speaks

Your Seductress Speaks

You don’t know this woman You haven’t got a clue This paragon of beauty Is a mystery to you You think that I’m so gentle You think that I am tame That’s just to get you going And trap you in my game You think that I’m so giving You think that I am sweet But I’ve come to devour And you’re my tasty treat You are a man of steel now But you’ll melt under my gaze You'll toss and turn in torment Eyes blurred in love sick daze You think you can withstand me I laugh at your demise Your body burns like kindling You're scorched by smoldering eyes My hands are fierce and vicious I tear to reach the prize Then sear your flesh at will Press in to sturdy thighs My lips, they ravish your lips My mouth burns down your neck My tongue brands all your body Leaves you a melting wreck You cry out in your moment You clutch my hair, you sigh No ease in the momentum Till flaring flames run dry You pant in sheer delirium I speak the words you need I coax you to the heights now My wanton passion freed The world explodes around us Inside is molten fire I’ve rocked you to the heavens But I’ve sated MY desire And when the blaze is over I lick your sweat dewed face I smile the smile of triumph And leave without a trace PRACTICE FOR SEDUCTION CONTEST! ;)

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Paul Callus

Date: 10/11/2014 5:37:00 PM

When the seductress goes to work, who cares about the consequences!? An excellent poem that 'reveals' a lot. a top rating, naturally! // paul

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/12/2014 1:13:00 AM

Thanks for your post on my Seductress poem, Paul. I've decided not to enter the contest...I might change my mind, but right now the seductress is silent....Go figure. Hugs! :)

Justin Bordner

Date: 10/8/2014 1:54:00 AM

Your eyes a weapon of priceless lust, tongue dangerous with delight, body a vessel of volcanic velvet, an unseized victor of passion's pounce! " Eyes blurred in love sick daze...Leaves you a melting wreck..." Mmmmm............incredible...that 8th verse is ravishing Eileen...viscious love...a FAV. J.A.B.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/8/2014 4:40:00 AM

Justin, I want so much to join your contest, but am reticent...Nothing seems good enough in my storehouse of poems...This was a trial run. It's a bit too raw for my liking....I want something softer...gentler...not so overt. The idea of a man weak in the presence of beauty has always been a theme that has captivated me. I started a novel when I was 15...The Broken Man. I have one or two of the sections of that here on the site...a man to be so overwhelmed by a woman that it breaks his every defense. To be that woman is the essence of the write for your contest. I hope I will come up with something. As always your posts sing to me.

Casarah Nance

Date: 10/7/2014 9:19:00 PM

AWESOME! :) you inspire me, oh great queen of seduction!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/7/2014 10:45:00 PM

Your own seductive writes are sizzlers, my dear. I loved the bit of tie my wrists with your fingers on Touch Me! ;) Great one!!! Good luck in the contest with that entry....

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/7/2014 7:50:00 PM

I can feell the power of a woman in the exhile of seduction here.I can hear the sizzling sound of lava erupting from an inviting volcano Wow

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/7/2014 10:47:00 PM

:) There is a competition going on in these theme, Charmaine. I don't know if I will join. As you know...I join few competitions. I rather write when things inspire me and not for a certain theme. This just flowed out of me...I'm not entering this one. We will see how things go. I tamed it a bit.... ;) I need a softer touch for the real piece. Thanks for visiting.

Gary Bateman

Date: 10/7/2014 4:44:00 PM

Wow Eileen!! I think you may have the top entry here. You write hooked my attention from the very beginning and brought my spirit along on that roller coaster ride of expectant imagery and passion clear up to the end point. This is a most solid "7." Very Superb write. And best of luck with the contest. Cheers, Gary

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/7/2014 10:49:00 PM

Thank you, Gary. I haven't actually entered this for the contest. I want a softer one for that....If I do join. Thank you for enjoying the ride and for writing such a kind post.

Tim Smith

Date: 10/7/2014 3:03:00 PM

You just left some burning embers...the rest of me has melted me away...come hose me down....love, love, love, love this...did I say I love this.......wow...hugs Tim.....a fav

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/7/2014 10:49:00 PM

Oh...now THAT is a reaction that I like. Thank you TIM! :) You brought a smile. I'm grateful for your choice of words on this piece. Hugs....of what is left of you! ;)

Jan Allison

Date: 10/7/2014 1:52:00 PM

Wow I cant wait to see the version for the contest Eileen cos this was hot hot hot hugs Jan xxxx

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/7/2014 10:50:00 PM

Thanks, sweetie. I may not join the contest. There are some pretty HOT contenders for that one. I may let it pass. Thanks for your lovely visit. Hugs

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/7/2014 9:57:00 AM

Many men have traded their souls for one such encounter! Bravo Eileen this one is smoldering!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/7/2014 11:15:00 AM

Thanks, Richard....I'm considering Justin's contest. I could write something new or revamp an older write...I have an Enchantress one that I really like. This one is rather....raw....Not soft enough...for that contest...I need something soft and beguiling. I was in Xena mode when I wrote this. Hugs

Herzel Poshiwa

Date: 10/7/2014 9:30:00 AM

MMMM WOW!!!!! Bravo.....I love this write...

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/7/2014 11:13:00 AM

Thanks, Herzel....I toned it down a tad....too steamy! ;)