Your Room

Behind your earlobe there was a birthmark that had the shape of palestine 
But they taught you in there that it was called israel 
In the hearth of your chest lied a heart full of vitriol
Out of your choice they altered your pulse, degraded your work 
they treated your sixty beats as the clock ticking away sixty seconds 
They manifested you as a clockwork
You sought the sabbath like a reaper
sought the harvest 
All of your zest was sucked out 
To fuel their comedown machine with it 
They enforced you to live behind the doors
To love a country that was never yours
Ought to learn the rules of a game you loathe 
Ought to learn  crescendo and decrescendo , both 
On a monday , i peered through my window and found you burning your paintings , your art 
The art that made me fall for you like the snow fell on everest , didnt they teach you that too? 
Snow fell on the havocked cielings of the kids of indochina too ,yet you never knew 
The next week you were hypnotised by your mother's gramaphone's blues
Immobilized in your second prison awaiting divine intervention or cues
On wednesday clamor rose in your cell and into your cells 
Both of your parents , ignited coals but luckily cathedral bells 
Covered your yelps 
I saw you from a nigh distance 
As the one between helsinki and tallin you knew from the geography book you were blandly eyeing 
You had a globe but your thoughts were never airborne
You had a soul but you deemed it way fainter than the infamous coals you stared at 
Thursday morning i resumed my ritual but you changed your entire course , mine aswell 
Your books towered beneath your feet
Which hung limply in the air 
Your birthmark was covered with the noose you tied around your head 
The geography book became your execution platform 
The thing was , i had the exact same book 
And im about to ensue you but first let me burn my poems.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Thomas Avatar
August 1, 2016 at 11:58 PM
awww one of my best friends is palestinian, so this hit quite close to home... i love this poem, and i would like to congratulate you on getting your poem featured, and also welcome you to the soup (Albeit a little late). Hope to see more Wonderful poems like this in the future, hugs, Angie
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June 16, 2016 at 11:57 AM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Sandra. :) By the way, you can check our different forms of poetry...
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June 15, 2016 at 8:54 AM
Sandra, , Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**
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June 14, 2016 at 4:57 PM
Sandra, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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June 14, 2016 at 5:09 PM
Thank you for the lovely welcome linda , glad to be a part in such a aesthetic community too , lots of love :)
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