Your Not a Poet- Hg
I'm not going to help YOU ; I'm not going to comment; Good or Bad
Yes: I viewed YOUR POEM; but if YOUR in the upper Echelon, how sad
What would that do to POETRY? ; What would it do to Poetry's History
A man with no Heart, Expressing no Feeling, Creates a POEM of Mystery
Of a LOVE unknown / unlived; A LOVE I thought would never to be reborn
Does anyone believe that todays POETRY is only a Word replacing Scorn
You think YOU speak of Love : of Life, of Reallity ; You do not know "LIFE "
For it is sad, can any of YOU tell me,YOU Have never lost Family or a WIFE
I want to understand POETRY : Before it Drives me " MAD "
Copyright © Hgarvey Daniel Esquire | Year Posted 2010
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