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Your Not a Poet- Hg

I'm not going to help YOU ; I'm not going to comment; Good or Bad Yes: I viewed YOUR POEM; but if YOUR in the upper Echelon, how sad What would that do to POETRY? ; What would it do to Poetry's History A man with no Heart, Expressing no Feeling, Creates a POEM of Mystery Of a LOVE unknown / unlived; A LOVE I thought would never to be reborn Does anyone believe that todays POETRY is only a Word replacing Scorn You think YOU speak of Love : of Life, of Reallity ; You do not know "LIFE " For it is sad, can any of YOU tell me,YOU Have never lost Family or a WIFE I want to understand POETRY : Before it Drives me " MAD "

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Date: 2/3/2012 6:47:00 PM
Very nice, I thoroughly enjoyed the read and the contemplation it brings to the reader.
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Date: 12/21/2010 4:23:00 PM
Soup Mail..HG my silent beau..luv..
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Date: 12/21/2010 1:50:00 PM
You OK? dear friend?? Light & Love
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Date: 12/20/2010 5:55:00 PM
a poet writing of something they are not even sure of themselves because they aren't sure where it comes from. the ending speaks loud, Harry. take care.(: ~Always&Forever
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Date: 12/20/2010 11:25:00 AM
Who says you are not a poet -you are a poet great understanding and competent enought to write such nice piece of introspective thoughts, HG
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Date: 12/20/2010 10:25:00 AM
A well-expressed and written Rhyme, HG. Always when the heart speaks, one can tell. Keep expressing exactly how you feel and sharing your poems with us. Blessings, peace and joy this holy season and always, Love, Audrey
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Date: 12/20/2010 9:31:00 AM
A brilliant piece HG my silent beau... a true insightful voyage into the inner recesses of mind and heart..spirit and soul my friend to express so much.. enjoyed with luv.. and u are a wonderful poet HG... your forever and always "Sweetheart >>>...
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