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Your Memory

YOUR MEMORY Your memory, A shadow of the past, Overcastting the sky of happiness Leaving thus the heart in The darkness of Despair! © Demetrios Trifiatis 24 MAY 2013

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Dan Kearley

Date: 5/29/2013 12:07:00 PM

Ah yes...The memory...Overcasting its shadow on the beauty of the future. All we can do is leave the past in the past, and take each new step into a bright new future of happy memories. :o) Past mistakes can drive you crazy! Life is a learning experience!

Manel Gunatillake

Date: 5/24/2013 10:53:00 PM

we all may have experienced this feeling in our journey. Your words vividly describe it. very nice.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 5/25/2013 4:51:00 AM

Yes, this is true! We all have! Thank you for visiting!

Therese Bacha

Date: 5/24/2013 9:04:00 PM

I think your heart is a Library, full of books only written by you. Amazing Demetrios. Again a 7>>>

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 5/25/2013 4:53:00 AM

Dearest Therese, how are you? How is my beloved Montreal? Thank you for your visit and your generous comments!

Karen Anglesey

Date: 5/24/2013 8:51:00 PM

Brilliant metaphor..."overcasting the sky of happiness"...you put the clincher in just the right place...great writing :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 5/25/2013 4:55:00 AM

Thank you Karen for your visit and your gracious comment! Life is teaching us many things!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/24/2013 11:08:00 AM

- A very deep work, feel your pain and longing in this poem Demetrios - Accomplished! - Have a great weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 5/24/2013 11:10:00 AM

My dear A-L! How nice your visit is! Thank you for your comment and your wishes. The same to you! oxox

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/24/2013 7:06:00 AM

Great emotive and expressive work..I can feel the love and the pain..Sara

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 5/24/2013 8:12:00 AM

Thank you Sara! Very nice to hear from you!

Russell Sivey

Date: 5/24/2013 6:01:00 AM

This is a phenomenal write, I really enjoyed reading this implications behind your awesome words this morning! You have delighted me by the wonderment of this poem my friend! What an outstanding piece, an awesome way to look into a bad memory in ones life...I've got my share of overcast days in my heart like anyone else! Great Work!!

Elai Cee

Date: 5/24/2013 5:50:00 AM

Oh! can relate here---love this--Elai

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 5/24/2013 5:57:00 AM

Who could not my dear? Thank you Elai, so gracious of you!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 5/24/2013 12:43:00 AM

Hi , nice on e Demetrios. xx

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 5/24/2013 3:55:00 AM

Thank you Mandy! You so kind!