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Your man O' fallen leaf of barren branch doth charge my heart, my aching heart with missing you, needing you On sun dried earth I lay, grasping at my dreams, so desperate, find that in this depth felled by wind of colder days, my life doth need your touch so very much it calls to thee, come to me, cover me shower me with hope ~ so far you stand ~ I feel as if I am a tiny creature, an ant on the pavement with cracks and crevice deep Foundling for the distance far, searching of a path to reap to thy heart, thy arms O' breath of love I beg thee home, to lie with you this eve, this winters eve of far off arches and grayish glare ~ My travels take me long away Places I am lost to stay find this man a’ crying tears of love for thee, tears of despair Crying, weeping, hoping, begging, come to me, come to me my love, my dream into my open arms ~ waiting ~ The day might fill the emptiness with broken branches barren so dare I say I have the right to honor love from you, hold it so within my heart aching My needs are many, the truth has shown for languished features painted hard, hard against my weathered skin, rough, broken I scream, my voice still faint of tone, louder as is nothing less sorted by the evening breeze blowing strong against the fence ~ I desire thee to touch me, kiss me, hold me, take me The flames of passion brightly burn igniting but this love I hold So cherished is your heart I feel it pounding, pulsing within mine own chest My quest is you and only you, design me, I am yours, make me as you would, carve me, bend me, mould me, sculpt me to be ~ your man Good night Soupers Ok, I got carried away a little. : )

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Date: 4/17/2017 10:18:00 PM
Very beautifully written good night, romantic, sweet n' passionate love poem Chris!:) I truly enjoy reading this one and so many others from you.A 7 +! A fav too. And for sure I'll be coming back to continue reading more of your very beautiful poetry.And thanks again n' again, for visiting my pages yesterday, I deeply appreciate so much your very kind support and all my friend:))Wishing you a very lovely week! In his light God bless you always!:)) D.
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Chris Green
Date: 4/18/2017 8:22:00 AM
Thanks again for all of the kindness you show me. I am happy you liked this one.
Date: 2/2/2017 3:32:00 PM
Pure, unfeigned emotions w/strong romantic yearnings. I agree totally w/John, a great mix of Old English style prose and soulful free verse. Another masterpiece of poetry. Your usual standard, I presume. A 7 and fave. Get the combo for this sensitive samba. L& P ~ always.
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Date: 2/2/2017 5:31:00 PM
Thanks so much my friend. I always appreciate the kindness you show to me and the encouragement I always find in your comments.
Date: 2/2/2017 10:44:00 AM
Beautifully written poem, Chris. Such a passionate expression of a loving aching heart.
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Chris Green
Date: 2/2/2017 1:50:00 PM
Thank you Christy for your kind words. I appreciate your friendship.
Date: 2/2/2017 7:59:00 AM
So well written from deep within your soul Chris! Excellent. :)
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Date: 2/2/2017 1:50:00 PM
Thank you Heidi, so much. I am happy you enjoyed this one.
Date: 2/2/2017 7:12:00 AM
Wonderful mix of olde English, with free verse, very very interesting style, very captivating write Chris. All I can say is WOW! a7
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Chris Green
Date: 2/2/2017 1:49:00 PM
Thank you John. I'll gladly accept a wow from a fantastic poet like you any day.
Date: 2/2/2017 5:15:00 AM
Oh fallen words you have bestowed..The Bard is gonna shake his tomb with envy :)...I love this..You did get carried away..into the deepest of your soul..: )..So much passion...and longing...and more..A defnite ..favourite.
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Date: 2/2/2017 1:48:00 PM
I always look forward to your visits my sweet friend. Thank you so very much. Your kindness is a precious gift to me.
Date: 2/2/2017 12:37:00 AM
Carried away? Only a wee bit ;) Man that 4th and 5th stanza... You made me an emotional man here. That 4th especially, wish I had written that, all of it :) Sleep well Chris.
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Chris Green
Date: 2/2/2017 1:47:00 PM
Thanks so much Darren, I just started writing this and couldn't stop, well I did stop, but you know what I mean. :) I am thrilled you liked this one.
Date: 2/1/2017 11:56:00 PM
WoW! Chris, you have truly penned a masterpiece. It's a work of art for sure. You caused the reader to feel the longing, desire, desperation and the deep passion, that the character in this write had to be with the one they loved.I found reading this write to be so intesnse.Because I felt everything you wrote about. Maybe you should get carried away more often. A without a doubt seven :-) Alexis PS, Good night my friend.
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Chris Green
Date: 2/2/2017 1:44:00 PM
Then, my friend, it was worth every moment I spent writing it. Thank you Alexis, for always being so nice to me.
Date: 2/1/2017 9:55:00 PM
Powerful song of love here! We all need what you are searching for in this poem! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Chris Green
Date: 2/2/2017 1:43:00 PM
I'll let you know when I find it Matthew. :) Thanks for visiting and leaving such a nice comment
Date: 2/1/2017 8:46:00 PM
*lost breath* (speechless)
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Chris Green
Date: 2/2/2017 1:42:00 PM
Thanks so much my sweet friend.
Date: 2/1/2017 6:19:00 PM
A true work of art! A classic piece my friend! You always know how to end a poem just so! Beautiful, Chris!
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Chris Green
Date: 2/2/2017 1:42:00 PM
I do like to close them out if I can. I am thrilled you liked this one Rick, it was a lot of work. :)