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Your Loveliness-Acrostic

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For my beloved wife.

Sample for my next contest, must be free style no rhyme, check out the flow that is what I am interested in. Make it sound like a free flowing poem not an acrostic, not just a list of things.

I am sure you all can do better!

Lost in the labyrinth of your loveliness L ost in the labyrinth of your loveliness O bscured obstacles can never obstruct my V ision of your elegance and graciousness E ffortlessly effusing and enlightening and L iberating my mind, inspiring my heart and soul I ntuitively knowing and satiating my every desire N eed and want, emancipating negativity and E liminating all disillusioned and disquieting thoughts S plendidly sophisticated in your stunning simplicity S oftly and silently satisfying my spirit and soul. John Derek Hamilton January 15, 2016

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