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Your Love's So Sweet

Your Love's So Sweet You and I like stars we beam, we’re Earth and Moon entwined forever. You’re in every lucid dream, igniting passion and desire. I see rainbows all the time; see them perched on tranquil blue skies. Summer days wear sunny smiles, and we’re like sweet grapes on a vine. Chorus: There were times when life brought me down, I didn’t know if I could ever be found. There you were… you breathed me back to life. Now I’m a rose in paradise. I’m gonna bloom with your heart beat… beating in rhythm with mine. I wanna sip on love so sweet; you’re much sweeter than wine. With our love we’re stars that shine, for all eternity together. Yes, I’m yours and you are mine, we surrender only to each other. Chorus: There were times when life brought me down, I didn’t know if I could ever be found. But there you were… you breathed me back to life. Now I’m a rose in paradise. I’m gonna bloom with your heart beat… beating in rhythm with mine. I wanna sip on love so sweet; you’re much sweeter than wine. I’m gonna bloom with your heart beat… beating in rhythm with mine. I wanna sip on love so sweet; you’re much sweeter than wine. Written: 07-26-2017 Inspired by song: “I Want to Know What Love Is” by Foreigner Contest: The Poet’s Ear Sponsor: Greg Barden I Want To Know What Love Is by Foreigner I gotta take a little time A little time to think things over I’d better read between the lines In case I need it when I'm older Now this mountain I must climb Feels like a world upon my shoulders all I through the clouds I see love shine It keeps me warm as life grows colder In my life there's been heartache and pain I don't know if I can face it again Can't stop now, I've traveled so far To change this lonely life I wanna know what love is I want you to show me I wanna feel what love is I know you can show me I'm gonna take a little time A little time to look around me I've got nowhere left to hide It looks like love has finally found me In my life there's been heartache and pain I don't know if I can face it again I can't stop now, I've traveled so far To change this lonely life I wanna know what love is I want you to show me I wanna feel what love is I know you can show me I wanna know what love is I want you to show me And I wanna feel I want to feel what love is

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Line Gauthier

Date: 2/10/2018 11:17:00 AM

Lovely lyrics. Well done, Pandita.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 2/10/2018 11:45:00 AM

Dear Line, you've been so sweet to leave me your kind messages and compliments! Thank you so much for the honor, my friend! Best regards. Pandita

Derek Noble Ayi

Date: 11/28/2017 12:32:00 PM

A nice lyric, it brings out the relevance of love.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 11/29/2017 3:27:00 PM

I am so appreciative of your kind, complimentary words Derek! Thanks a million! Pandita

James Edward Lee Sr.

Date: 8/16/2017 10:06:00 PM

Greetings, Pandita Lovely, lovely brilliant I pray your keyboard ALWAYS WORKS. Your verse is beautiful, romantic inspiring. A new fav for me. Write ON James :D

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 8/17/2017 12:30:00 AM

Greetings to you James, thank you for visiting and leaving me your lovely words of praise which I so very much appreciate! Best regards. Pandita

Vladislav Raven

Date: 8/16/2017 8:48:00 AM

Hi Pandita, it has all been said in the comments below. This is an excellent piece. I don't know the original song at all. I love the images your words paint on my canvas. So beautiful the words that sing. A beautiful write Pandita. A definite fave. Hugs....Mike. XX

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 8/17/2017 12:42:00 AM

My dear friend Mike, it is so good to hear from you as always! Thank you for your superlative compliments and continued encouragement! Hugs. Pandita

Ronald A. Williams

Date: 8/14/2017 7:57:00 PM

Great lyrical poem. A song so sweet. A new born classical treat. Great love expressions with imagery. I hope that it can be sung as well. Amen

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 8/17/2017 12:33:00 AM

Dear Ronald, I thank you for your wonderful complimentary words! Yes, the words can be sung to the same tune as the original song that inspired it. Blessings and best regards. Pandita

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 8/12/2017 4:07:00 PM

Just a beautiful lyrical poem, Pandita. I felt the love ... and it was very sweet. Appreciate the Foreigner song too, will download it for sure. A gem of a poem, dear. Love and joy always.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 8/12/2017 7:44:00 PM

Hi Freddie, you're so sweet to leave me your kind message and compliments! Thank you so much and have an enjoyable weekend, my friend! Pandita

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 7/31/2017 12:04:00 AM

Excellent and romantic lyrics. Beautifully said with pen welled. Thanks for sharing it.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/31/2017 11:59:00 AM

Hello Ravi, thank you for visiting and leaving me your wonderful words which I appreciate! Best regards. Pandita

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/28/2017 4:34:00 PM

Hi Pandora, You have penned such beautiful and romantic lyrics. "I want to know what is" is one of my all time favorite songs. The song inspired you to write some wonderful lyrics. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/29/2017 7:57:00 PM

Hello Alexis, I thank you for your wonderful compliments! We do share a love for this amazing song! Hugs. Pandita

Paul Callus

Date: 7/28/2017 10:37:00 AM

These are lovely and romantic lyrics, Pandita. Sipping on the wine of love is the secret elixir that keeps you ever young at heart! Warm regards // paul

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/29/2017 7:58:00 PM

Awwww! Thank you so much, dear Paul for stopping by and leaving your lovely compliments! Hugs and best regards. Pandita

John Michaels

Date: 7/28/2017 9:22:00 AM

Lovely write, Pandita. I especially like the "I'm gonna bloom with your heart beat" line. Best of luck with the contest. Regards, John.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/28/2017 9:54:00 AM

Hi John, thank you for visiting and leaving me your wonderful words which I appreciate! Have a great weekend. Pandita

Joseph May

Date: 7/27/2017 2:01:00 PM

A lyrical gem Pandita... best wishes

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/27/2017 2:42:00 PM

Dear Joseph, I thank you for your lovely compliments! Hugs and best regards. Pandita

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 7/27/2017 10:46:00 AM

Beautiful Lyric piece Pandita!:) Well done!Be blessed!:) D.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/27/2017 12:17:00 PM

Hi Dorian, I'm so happy you like this one! Thank you, my friend! Hugs. Pandita

M. L. Kiser

Date: 7/27/2017 3:34:00 AM

A beautiful poem; flows smoothly and had some great imagery; the love is there.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/27/2017 12:16:00 PM

Hi M.L., I so very much appreciate your lovely compliments! Thank you so much for stopping by! Hugs. Pandita

Ovidiu Bocsa

Date: 7/27/2017 1:49:00 AM

Me gusta su sonrisa y los ojos y la cara inclinada sobre mis pequeños nuevos libros de poesía que se utiliza para mantenerlo en el bolsillo del pecho. Simplemente toque ligeramente el libro y por eso me siento que está vivo, palpitante. Me gustaría que las letras también son del mundo del corazón sonrisa y la sociedad. Creo que se puede ver cada imagen y cada línea que usted escribió. Lápiz romo se olvidan en la mesita de noche.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/27/2017 2:40:00 PM

¡Mi amigo, muchas gracias por sus maravillosas palabras! Su respuesta refleja maravillosamente al gran poeta que usted es. ¡Espero que estés disfrutando de un día que está lleno de sol! Abrazos. Pandita

Silent One

Date: 7/26/2017 3:24:00 PM

I love that song and you have wrote a wonderful romantic song to accompany it..

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/27/2017 12:11:00 PM

Thank you my dear SO. It's always a pleasure hearing from you! This song is also one of my all-time favourites! Hope you are enjoying a beautiful day! Hugs. Pandita

Ovidiu Bocsa

Date: 7/26/2017 2:13:00 PM

Wonderful, wonderful lyric flying high. Singing the life as it is is a brave attempt and successful one.Congrat.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/26/2017 2:20:00 PM

Hello Ovidiu, thank you for visiting and leaving me your wonderful words which I appreciate! Best regards. Pandita

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/26/2017 2:08:00 PM

Lovely and lyrical! You romantic heart sings!

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/26/2017 2:18:00 PM

Awwww! Thank you so much, Kim for stopping by and leaving your lovely compliments! Hugs. Pandita