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Your Love

(Double Tanka) I can see your love In all that you do for me Your dear face I see Your love each day I can touch I'm so happy you're with me You're so fine to me And you're so beautiful too Let's get together We can have fun forever So come join me and you'll see. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 aka ladylove copyright@2014 November,29,2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Meade Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 7:47 PM
Awesome . . . the tender moments that lead to physical intimacy. Nicely done.
Manassian Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 6:50 PM
Quite an invitation....full of love and longing.
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