Your Love

At seven sixteen, I heard the first bird sing.
You're still asleep with breaths steady and even.
I'm drinking my tea while birds are on the wing.
Nature's beauty this morn competes with heaven.
When I see rising sun reflected on dew,
The way scarlet skies lights fire in your eyes,
As sweet birds begin to sing I think of you,
With love in your eyes each morn when we arise.

Through these many years I feel love in your touch,
I see it in many things you do for me.
I hear it in your deep voice I love so much.
Let us share our love throughout eternity.
I know your gentle touch with your soft embrace.
I rejoice in the joy glowing from your face.


2-10-20

Italian sonnet consists of 14 lines and 2 stanzas with eleven syllables in each line. The first stanza is 8 lines and it is known as the octave and the second stanza is the 6 line sestet.
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Raven Avatar
March 26, 2020 at 6:37 PM
Hi Connie, you have found your love eternal and you write on it with such romantic, tender lines. The beauty comes through, within such vivid images that stay painted on the canvas of the mind. You have such a wonderful way of writing the feelings of the heart Connie. A fav. Have a wonderful evening. Hugs....Mike. XX
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March 26, 2020 at 7:36 PM
You are so kind Mike. I am have a most wonderful day today. My little premature granddaughter Cosette gets to go home from the hospital today. She is one month old and weighs 4 lbs. Thank you my friend. Blessings xxoo
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March 14, 2020 at 11:13 AM
You amazing panned the Lovely morning . Good luck for eternal love
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March 14, 2020 at 11:14 AM
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February 22, 2020 at 4:00 PM
WoW! Connie, This is such a beautiful and heartfelt poem. The love that you two share is evident in this write. Congratulations on your win. It was well deserved. Have a wonderful weekend:-) Alexis
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February 21, 2020 at 8:40 AM
Hi Connie your poems are awesome, could never write love and nature poems as well as you - I so enjoy your poetry. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
Roper Avatar
February 20, 2020 at 9:51 PM
Back with congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
Dietrich Avatar
February 20, 2020 at 4:43 PM
Ahhhhhh you did an Italian sonnet! Beautiful, dear connie
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 20, 2020 at 5:07 PM
Thank you Andrea. xxoo
Pinet Avatar
February 20, 2020 at 1:51 PM
This poem is so sentimental and romantic that it flows off the tongue like syrup; leaving a sweet nostalgic after taste....delicious! Emile.
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 20, 2020 at 2:26 PM
Thank you for such a lovely comment Emile. xxoo
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February 20, 2020 at 1:33 PM
Congratulations on your win, Connie, with this lovely Sonnet of enduring love. // Barry.
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 20, 2020 at 2:27 PM
Thank you Barry. Have a great day. xxoo
Chiri Avatar
February 20, 2020 at 3:39 AM
Connie congrats on your win!;)
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 20, 2020 at 9:08 AM
Thank you very much Brenda. You had the most beautiful entries in your contest. I found a typo in mind that I corrected. I am happy to be on your list of winners. xxoo
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February 15, 2020 at 2:34 PM
Beautiful romantic sentiments flowing from the heart, Connie. True love endures the passage of time. Sharing the beauty of nature and your loved one makes each new day worth looking forward to! ~ Warm regards // paul
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February 14, 2020 at 11:30 PM
A dreamily lovely sonnet, that is wonderfully romantic, with a perfect rhyme! :)
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February 14, 2020 at 3:21 PM
Beautifully written Connie. love phyl
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 14, 2020 at 6:37 PM
Thank you very much Phyl. Nature goes with love for both of us. Happy Valentine's Day! xxoo
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February 14, 2020 at 3:09 PM
I can feel the peace and joy you experience in being truly loved. You sense it in the birds and nature and you are reminded of its presence in each loving gesture. You have warmed my heart with this wonderful tribute, Connie.
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February 14, 2020 at 6:36 PM
Thank you John. I appreciate your lovely comment, especially today on Valentine's Day! xxoo
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February 12, 2020 at 1:50 PM
- A wonderful poem that sparkles with love and deep emotions, Connie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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February 13, 2020 at 12:44 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise. I hope you have a Happy Valentine's Day. xxoo
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February 11, 2020 at 2:47 PM
Connie, well written verse, love the feeling and imagery. Like the explanation at the bottom of your verse. Sonnet still confuse me. Thank you for the congratulations on POTD. Eve
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February 11, 2020 at 3:48 PM
Thank you very much Eve. xxoo
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February 11, 2020 at 2:43 PM
Captures the elegance of the dawn with the wonder of love that has grown through the years - hope you two have many more years of happiness!
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 11, 2020 at 3:47 PM
Thank you very much Michelle. We are growing old together. xxoo
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February 11, 2020 at 10:31 AM
Now even Trump can see one can obey the rules and still come out on top! Aloha! Rico
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February 11, 2020 at 11:21 AM
Lol....thank you Rico. xxoo
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February 11, 2020 at 7:46 AM
Lovely sentiments--straight from the loving heart. Enjoyed the scenic journey in verses of love, Connie.
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 11, 2020 at 1:11 PM
Thank you Vijay. I feel the romance of Valentine's Day approaching. xxoo
Green Avatar
February 11, 2020 at 7:07 AM
Absolutely beautiful my friend. There is a certain enchantment to hearing birds singing at sunrise, especially when you get to share that enchantment with one you love. One of my favorite times of day and you have captured the essence of love and nature perfectly.
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 11, 2020 at 1:12 PM
Thank you Chris. I love the quiet of early morning. xxoo
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February 11, 2020 at 5:01 AM
A beautiful sonnet you have penned, Connie. Lovely! Hugs Charlie
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 11, 2020 at 1:13 PM
Thank you very much Charles. xxoo
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February 10, 2020 at 10:11 PM
G'day Connie … I've wrote this many times about how lovely your poetry and this Italian sonnet is no exception - thank you once again Connie - Lindsay
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February 11, 2020 at 11:28 AM
I appreciate that Lindsay. Poetry brings me joy. Thank you my friend. xxoo
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February 10, 2020 at 8:27 PM
this is such a beautiful poem of love and adoration... wonderfully penned Connie... hugs and blessings XoXo
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 11, 2020 at 11:25 AM
Thank you Sandra. Your comments are always so generous and appreciated. xxoo
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