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Steve Grand - Time

Do you see me smiling like a fool? Even though you don't see me at all? For I get weak knees, almost fall Gross, I want to act composed and cool Have you seen the way I look at you? I almost melt, I stammer, stutter, "Jerk", I think, I'm blushing, "you utter killjoy". I think I'm having the flu Lately I can't seem to focus My mind keeps exiting my head Near you I turn to a baby, instead Of a cool guy, I feel aimless Perhaps if we could have a drink? Quirky you, dating awkward me? Resting my head against your Tee, Staying the night.. perhaps.. in sync? The crowd dances to your latest hit Up stage I run, my arms open wide ... Villain! Guards tackle and push me aside. Warm tears, this is the end of it.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 10/29/2022 11:34:00 AM
Loved it. Really. Amazing work
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Date: 9/5/2016 10:38:00 PM
Great job! I'm amused and loving it ... CayCay
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Darren White
Date: 9/5/2016 10:43:00 PM
Thank you CayCay, I loved writing this :D
Date: 9/5/2016 6:36:00 AM
Love your theme here Darren - I guess many adoring fans could relate to this dream of getting closer to their 'idol' good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Darren White
Date: 9/5/2016 7:25:00 AM
Hi there Jan :) So totally not me LOL, so much fun to do, and harder than I expected! I liked to participate. HUGS, Darren.

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