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Your Gravity Forever Changed

YOUR GRAVITY FOREVER CHANGED

		Year of the feather, magical time,
		two souls entangled, love is prime.

		Mystery is in her galactic eyes,
		they see across the abyss
		of time, recognize me.

		Sweet ambrosia, in one kiss
		Release such mortal pleasure.
		Venus in body and form,
		My cosmic treasure.

		Dark skies mean starlight
		where galaxies, you and I,
		collide; scattered light,
		I am fragmented by your
		gravity, forever changed.

NOTES:
	For the contest IT’S ALL ABOUT FOUR by Broken Wings, April 3/18. The theme of this piece is love woven on the backdrop of celestial references in a way that shows how love is a cosmic connection of galactic proportions.

Copyright © Phil Capitano | Year Posted 2018

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Anil Deo Date: 8/9/2018 6:57:00 AM great footnote, to add to the Offering of flowers of love AND respect around us. INcluding those we sometimes take for granted. Shalom, shalom Poet Phil Login to Reply

Gary Bateman Date: 5/4/2018 9:25:00 AM Hello Phil, Thanks for your recent comment on the latest co-write I posted. "Your Gravity Forever Changed" is a marvelously-written verse. I can see that it has your usual highest degree of consummate perfection as always!! Congrats also on your contest win!! Cheers and Best, Gary Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 5/1/2018 8:18:00 PM Phil, great romantic imagery {:~) congratulations on your placement Hugs Eve ~`* Login to Reply Phil Capitano Date: 5/2/2018 12:58:00 PM Thanks for the love, Eve. ;)

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/29/2018 5:46:00 PM Very lovely. Congrats in the contest, Phil. Login to Reply Phil Capitano Date: 4/30/2018 7:31:00 AM Thank you Andrea for commenting. :)

Kim Rodrigues Date: 4/29/2018 4:39:00 PM This is a beauty, Phil! A lover’s delight! Congrats! Login to Reply

Constance La France Date: 4/29/2018 10:32:00 AM Phil, CONGRATULATIONS on your win in my contest with this lovely and dreamy write, well done ! Login to Reply Phil Capitano Date: 4/30/2018 7:32:00 AM So glad to tickle you this way. Namaste.

James Inman Date: 4/29/2018 8:16:00 AM A great write Phil. Interesting Tanka, it can be interpreted as a metaphor for working through troubles in a relationship. Login to Reply Phil Capitano Date: 4/30/2018 7:37:00 AM Good insight James, thanks for stopping by and commenting.

Line Gauthier Date: 4/29/2018 7:17:00 AM Well done, Phil. Indeed "love is a cosmic connection of galactic proportions" Login to Reply Phil Capitano Date: 4/30/2018 7:38:00 AM Thanks for your help with this piece and for all your support.

Susan Gentry Date: 4/29/2018 2:08:00 AM Congratulations on your win with this well-written interesting poem. Enjoyed. Login to Reply Phil Capitano Date: 4/30/2018 7:42:00 AM Thank you Susan, its always nice to have positive feedback. Namaste.

Frank Sheehan Date: 4/4/2018 1:28:00 PM Great write. Very creative and interesting. Good luck in the contest. Login to Reply Phil Capitano Date: 4/4/2018 6:37:00 PM Thanks Frank ;)

John Hamilton Date: 4/4/2018 10:43:00 AM Enjoyed the write Phil nice to have you back, should do well in the contest! Login to Reply Phil Capitano Date: 4/4/2018 6:37:00 PM Thanks John, good to be back.

Line Gauthier Date: 4/3/2018 4:30:00 PM Beautiful chain of forms, Phil. Login to Reply