Phil Capitano Poet Verse

Your Gravity Forever Changed

YOUR GRAVITY FOREVER CHANGED

		Year of the feather, magical time,
		two souls entangled, love is prime.

		Mystery is in her galactic eyes,
		they see across the abyss
		of time, recognize me.

		Sweet ambrosia, in one kiss
		Release such mortal pleasure.
		Venus in body and form,
		My cosmic treasure.

		Dark skies mean starlight
		where galaxies, you and I,
		collide; scattered light,
		I am fragmented by your
		gravity, forever changed.

NOTES:
	For the contest IT’S ALL ABOUT FOUR by Broken Wings, April 3/18. The theme of this piece is love woven on the backdrop of celestial references in a way that shows how love is a cosmic connection of galactic proportions.

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Anil Deo August 9, 2018 at 6:57 AM great footnote, to add to the Offering of flowers of love AND respect around us. INcluding those we sometimes take for granted. Shalom, shalom Poet Phil

Gary Bateman May 4, 2018 at 9:25 AM Hello Phil, Thanks for your recent comment on the latest co-write I posted. "Your Gravity Forever Changed" is a marvelously-written verse. I can see that it has your usual highest degree of consummate perfection as always!! Congrats also on your contest win!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Eve Roper May 1, 2018 at 8:18 PM Phil, great romantic imagery {:~) congratulations on your placement Hugs Eve ~`* Phil Capitano May 2, 2018 at 12:58 PM Thanks for the love, Eve. ;)

Andrea Dietrich April 29, 2018 at 5:46 PM Very lovely. Congrats in the contest, Phil. Phil Capitano April 30, 2018 at 7:31 AM Thank you Andrea for commenting. :)

Kim Rodrigues April 29, 2018 at 4:39 PM This is a beauty, Phil! A lover’s delight! Congrats!

Constance La France April 29, 2018 at 10:32 AM Phil, CONGRATULATIONS on your win in my contest with this lovely and dreamy write, well done ! Phil Capitano April 30, 2018 at 7:32 AM So glad to tickle you this way. Namaste.

James Inman April 29, 2018 at 8:16 AM A great write Phil. Interesting Tanka, it can be interpreted as a metaphor for working through troubles in a relationship. Phil Capitano April 30, 2018 at 7:37 AM Good insight James, thanks for stopping by and commenting.

Line Gauthier April 29, 2018 at 7:17 AM Well done, Phil. Indeed "love is a cosmic connection of galactic proportions" Phil Capitano April 30, 2018 at 7:38 AM Thanks for your help with this piece and for all your support.

Susan Gentry April 29, 2018 at 2:08 AM Congratulations on your win with this well-written interesting poem. Enjoyed. Phil Capitano April 30, 2018 at 7:42 AM Thank you Susan, its always nice to have positive feedback. Namaste.

Frank Sheehan April 4, 2018 at 1:28 PM Great write. Very creative and interesting. Good luck in the contest. Phil Capitano April 4, 2018 at 6:37 PM Thanks Frank ;)

John Hamilton April 4, 2018 at 10:43 AM Enjoyed the write Phil nice to have you back, should do well in the contest! Phil Capitano April 4, 2018 at 6:37 PM Thanks John, good to be back.

Line Gauthier April 3, 2018 at 4:30 PM Beautiful chain of forms, Phil.