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Your Future

The future is waiting, no pushing, no shoving, your will, your mind, your soul, will deliver, your future.

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Deneen White

Date: 9/9/2008 5:35:00 PM

nice simplistic write with a great message, take care D-nyce

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 9/9/2008 8:44:00 AM

The future comes and we are the authors that will determine how it will be. There will be many choices to make and we hope and pray they will be the right ones. Makes one think. God BLess Phyl

Sharon Winter

Date: 9/6/2008 1:35:00 PM

So many difficult choices needed to be made along the journey. Hope they are the right ones. So much said here. Great write. Love, Shar

Michael Jordan

Date: 9/6/2008 1:34:00 PM

Hi Christy - I reckon that pretty well sums it all up - Great poem - Short, concise and to the point - God Bless Christy

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/6/2008 12:53:00 PM

Short and to the point! Well done! ~ Carrie

Sean Kelly

Date: 9/6/2008 12:15:00 PM

Clever piece , Christy ... My friends tell me , I live in the past... Now , where did I put that crystal-ball ???? ...

Heidie Buys

Date: 9/6/2008 12:07:00 PM

So very truely spoken. Good one. Regards Heidie

James Foulk

Date: 9/6/2008 10:51:00 AM

a great piece, thank you for reading my poem and for your comment

John Loving Iii

Date: 9/6/2008 10:19:00 AM

so true so true. jhl