Your First Born

As I look back to see, you weren’t always there for me
When it came to my deepest fears, you weren’t there to wipe my tears
But as the years started rushing by, I’ll have to say with a sigh…
You needed me just as bad and those times were so sad
And now that I’m older, I now know why you left me and mommy with such a heavy boulder
So I accept your apology because I know you’re sorry
You always seem to know when I need a smile, especially when you haven’t seen one in a 
while
We know how to make each other laugh and it makes time fly past
Dad, that’s why I’m so thankful for you, I would never ask for anyone new
I love you very much because you try to help me with problems and such
I know you wish you could give me the world, but I’m proud enough with my title
“Your First Born”

                                                                                                               -Korina Serrato
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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January 19, 2011 at 11:53 AM
Ahh.. This is what I call a stylish entry into poetry soup. Welcome.Impressive!! I am pleased to have read your write today. I invite you to read my poem The White Snow. Hope you like it.
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March 19, 2010 at 8:57 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets.. please continue to share your creative writes with us all..as this delight tonight...luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..
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March 19, 2010 at 8:25 AM
very nice write and welcome to poetry soup faleshia
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March 19, 2010 at 3:13 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Korina. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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March 19, 2010 at 1:20 AM
Hi, Lovely first write on Poetry Soup. Welcome and i hope you write many more.
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