Your Face

memory brings your face to me, like rapture of the deep i see, your love enfolds so tenderly, with-out you time and space, almost cease to be, malaise? wont set me free, can i escape... Don re : Asunder "Anne Rutherford"

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Skat A

Date: 6/30/2013 6:56:00 PM

It is nice, Don, one can get lost so easily. Thank you for sharing <3 ~SKAT~ <3

Anne Rutherford

Date: 6/30/2013 5:43:00 PM

Wow Don you got it ,I love what you did with this. I didn't know if what I had to say would be abstruse or not , But you hit the nail on the head. I wanted it to be simple and to the point ,wasn't sure my feelings would show through the words .Hugs Anne