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Your Coming

As I saw you coming, A smile dared walk hastily across My lips, Erasing thus, in its passage, the grim Imprints Caused by your aching absence. © Demetrios Trifiatis 27 APRIL 2013

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Sukmawati Komala

Date: 4/29/2013 10:26:00 AM

Lovely write <3 very amazing :) enjoyed so very much your beautiful expression <3 Sk

Seosamh De Burca

Date: 4/28/2013 1:05:00 AM

Beautiful poem, it raised my spirits when I got home this morning after a long night shift. I agree with all your fellow admirers below, a wonderful piece. Wonderful.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 4/27/2013 11:15:00 PM

This is enchantingly beautiful, dear poet. Simply wonderful. Keep smiling! :)

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/27/2013 7:06:00 PM

I saw you coming and the sun rose, bloom for me? [such a great smile!] Light & Love

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/27/2013 12:17:00 PM

Oh .... it is beautiful, Demetrios! - Wishing you a lovely weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 4/27/2013 2:07:00 PM

Than you my dear! oxoxox

Russell Sivey

Date: 4/27/2013 5:47:00 AM

This is a fantastic and wondrous write my friend! You sure have enlightened my soul with this awe inspiring poem this morning! What a tremendous piece of art! It's like you have put me there waiting for my spouse from a long absence, only to see her coming, with pure delight I crack a smile, beautifully done Demetrios, wonderfully done, Great Work!!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 4/27/2013 5:53:00 AM

I am happy my friend that I was able to express your feelings towards the person you love! Yes, that moment is a treasure of incalculable value! Thank you!