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Your Captivating Smile (Ignition)

The captivating moon light shows your smile Here I sit with visions of you, With great plans of our love growing in grand style This feeling makes me brand new, The imagery of your charm drives me so wild Cements our souls with glue, Walking hand in hand with you for just awhile Closer we drew, The style of your smile makes it all worthwhile Let’s renew, The love of life we hold so true without guile Anew, What was, is, and forever will be fertile Two! Comments: The “Ignition Style” consists of 14-lines with the following meters: 11-8, 11-7, 11-6, 11-4, 11-3, 11-2, and 11-1. The rhyme scheme is abab etc. It begins with an eleven syllable long line and varied syllable short lines. If two verses are desired, the second verse must be reversed.

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Date: 1/17/2011 9:30:00 AM
Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week on PoetrySoup Joseph. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/16/2011 9:30:00 PM
Congratulations on your delightful poem being featured this week on Soup, Joseph. Will attempt this form soon. Beautiful poem! Always Annalise (Audrey)
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