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Your Best Pick Up Line

He said, 

   " I don't like to play hard to get, I just like to play"  


Contest: Your best pick up line
Sponsor: Judy Konos

Copyright © Eve Roper | Year Posted 2015

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May 6, 2015 at 3:00 PM

Hey, he stole my line! Doesn't matter though...All it got me was a bloody nose from the lady's boyfriend who was 20 years younger, outweighed me by 50 lbs. and was a bodybuilder...VERY funny and original Eve! Congrats - Tim

May 9, 2015 at 4:12 PM

Hahaha... sorry. Blessings and thank you, Tim :~) Eve

May 6, 2015 at 10:04 AM

Good one Eve :-) Congratulations with your pick up line entry in Judy K's "Fun pick up line" poetry contest. Sweet *SKAT*

May 6, 2015 at 12:56 PM

Thank you, Skat, for your congratulations! Blessings and hugs Eve

Poet Destroyer A

May 6, 2015 at 9:36 AM

Eve, LOL, I can tell by that line, he's a silly one ..love it. Congratulations with your awesome pickup line win. Always ~LINDA~

May 6, 2015 at 12:56 PM

Linda, thank you for your congratulations! Blessings and hugs Eve

May 6, 2015 at 6:52 AM

Congrats on your win Eve

May 6, 2015 at 8:01 AM

Thank you for your congratulations! Blessings and hugs Eve

May 5, 2015 at 9:24 PM

Thank you for being in my contest

May 6, 2015 at 8:03 AM

Thank you for allowing me to be in your contest and placing me. Blessings and hugs Eve

Richard Lamoureux

May 5, 2015 at 8:12 PM

She said, "You will be at home alone playing with yourself!" sorry I couldn't resist. Congratulations Eve.

May 6, 2015 at 8:04 AM

I love it Rick you may comment anytime you want. :~) Blessings and hugs Eve

May 5, 2015 at 8:05 PM

Hmmmmm really good lol!

May 6, 2015 at 8:05 AM

Thank you, Thomas. Blessings and hugs Eve

Andrea Dietrich

May 5, 2015 at 5:13 PM

ahhh, very nice one!!! Congrats

May 6, 2015 at 8:05 AM

Thank you, Andrea, :~) !! Blessings and hugs Eve

Robert Stoner Jr

May 5, 2015 at 5:05 PM

you should offer him some chalk and jacks, congratulations Eve on your win

May 6, 2015 at 8:07 AM

Thank you,Robert,good idea except I love playing jacks :~) ! Blessings and hugs Eve

Jaycee Cervenka

May 5, 2015 at 4:30 PM

Congrats on the contest win! I actually met this guy! LOL ~Jan

May 6, 2015 at 8:07 AM

Thank you for your congratulations! Blessings and hugs Eve

May 5, 2015 at 2:52 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Eve:-) Hugs Jan xx

May 6, 2015 at 8:08 AM

Thank you :~) congrats! Blessings and hugs Eve

May 4, 2015 at 6:07 PM

Great, good luck!!

Richard Lamoureux

May 3, 2015 at 9:10 AM

I think it would be more effective if she said it *lol*.

May 3, 2015 at 10:56 AM

Your right, Rick, but I have never been a witty person more the quiet type :~)

Andrea Dietrich

April 30, 2015 at 10:55 PM

cool one!! I didn't realize she meant to do it this simply, just to put the pick up line but I am seeing everyone doing it this way. Gosh, I better hurry and put one!!

April 30, 2015 at 11:00 PM

Andrea, I never know if I'm doing it right or not. I just place one then if it does anything then I can pat myself on the back and feel very fortunate. Good luck sweet friend eve

Constance La France

April 30, 2015 at 10:14 PM

Eve, oh he was a smooth operator, best of luck in the contest 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, at the gallery..

April 30, 2015 at 10:18 PM

hahaha... he was, it was my husband. thank you hugs :~)

April 30, 2015 at 5:46 PM

Funny. Thanks, Eve!

April 30, 2015 at 11:01 PM

Thank you, Mark, :~) hugs

April 30, 2015 at 4:32 PM

ha ha ha - love it Eve - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

May 4, 2015 at 12:01 PM

Thank you, sweet friend from the United Kingdom, from your friend in the Big State of Texas. hugs and laughter always Eve

April 30, 2015 at 3:25 PM

Did you play?

May 4, 2015 at 12:04 PM

Of course I played. Hee..Heee.. !!!!

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