Your Bed

One hand to the side of my face
Nestled in the sturdy crook of my palm
I feel stolen away
But with a taste of venom, I could
Bite my tongue and river red
All the luckiest in the world.

I hope you know my movements
How this arc means love,
And this slow dive means pain.
It consumes me to some degree,
The exhilaration!

Rigid mosque, my solid wall
To you. You are dead to a spotlight
Of flickering Adonis.

I feel the aging process
And glitters of dust weep from
Beneath as my knees ache
In their slings of flesh
Sickened centrefold and
Jesus Christ, how I'm the
Lucky one now!

Lying in your bed
With all the malice of
A mercury madness colliding within.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Hero Aka Hero-Wilson Avatar
July 21, 2010 at 8:19 PM
GREAT POEM I SEE WHY IT WAS FEATURED! RHONDA HERO AKA THE KEEPER
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July 19, 2010 at 6:00 PM
WOW!
Adeite Avatar
July 19, 2010 at 11:03 AM
Congrats Nath on having your poem being featured this week, enjoy the honor and keep writing. Love, always Adeleke
Brown Avatar
July 19, 2010 at 5:11 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Nathaniel. Love, Carol
Fisher Avatar
July 18, 2010 at 6:56 AM
Many congrats on your feature this week. Rgds Jan
Brown Avatar
June 3, 2010 at 11:31 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round Nathaniel. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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May 21, 2010 at 11:19 AM
I'm very new to the site and am blown away by many of the works I've read. I find sometimes with free verse that I don't enjoy reading them aloud as much but this is fabulous. I love to read good poetry aloud - it makes my skin tingle and I'm happy to say that this gave me goose bumps. Well done. P.V.
Fisher Avatar
May 18, 2010 at 12:20 PM
Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette
Guzzi Avatar
May 17, 2010 at 5:17 PM
strong, powerful, possessed and possive.."And glitters of dust weep from/ beneath as my knees ache/ In their slings of flesh/Sickened centrefold and/Jesus Christ, how I'm the/Lucky one now!" now thats writing! Please let me have your input on Part 1 When Madness Rides on moonlight & Part 2?
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May 17, 2010 at 9:49 AM
I don't get to this site as often as I used to and can't find time to comment on poems as much as I want to either...but I had to stop and tell you how much I liked this piece. You have very unique metaphorical phrasing-kee up the good work! Right on, Write on!! Steve
Brown Avatar
May 17, 2010 at 4:44 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Nathaniel. Love, Carol
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March 2, 2010 at 2:35 PM
THIS WAS A GOOD WRITE... TRUELY SAD
Kendrick Avatar
October 24, 2009 at 5:27 AM
That is really sad especially the last three lines. Keep writing. Sara
Shahwan Avatar
October 23, 2009 at 6:37 PM
This is interesting poem. All the best.
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