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Your Beauty Is Said

(31/07/2013) Clench your bum in those jeans And suck your belly for that corset *Ugh…it is okay..carry on..* With your sweats hanging on your forehead, Not to mention your short breathing Put on those heels that will surely make you wail *Oh dear God* Looks like you’re in pain Now sit your tightened thigh and face the mirror Wipe your sweats and *Aahh..ok…hold on…ugh* Practice to suck your belly in, I know it’s hard Just try to breathe Now you’re ready for the pinching plucks Starting from right then left One pinch for each pluck *I know it hurts* But look at thaaaat! There you go, two neat and pretty arches Put on some make up to make you look desirable Yup! To sweep all the painful expression is preferable Noww.. a bit tease and pull for your hair A bit here and there And you’re about ready for your self fair Face your reflection And see that those painful grins are paid Your beauty is said WritInspired by P.D. Contest "Beauty" But I think I was too late :(

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Date: 11/22/2013 9:00:00 AM
Cinderella entices the mirror. GREAT description of creating your beauty.
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Date: 11/15/2013 5:36:00 PM
wow, this is great fun. I really enjoyed this one.
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Date: 9/6/2013 6:53:00 PM
Love it, what fun.
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Date: 8/16/2013 3:41:00 PM
love this, my friend
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Date: 8/15/2013 9:37:00 PM
There is a real price for beauty. Nice poem Dinda
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Date: 8/8/2013 7:54:00 AM
- Whatever contest or not ... It is a beautiful poem, Dinda! - Thank you - Have a nice day! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/2/2013 2:30:00 PM
What people go through for physical beauty when the real beauty lies with in . We get drawn into the world of advertisements. Keep writing and making us look at things as they really are Dinda.Thank you.
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Date: 8/2/2013 1:15:00 AM
sorry you missed the contest. I think PD would really have liked this one. I sure enjoyed it.
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Date: 8/2/2013 12:23:00 AM
what a pity you missed the contest - lovely write : )
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