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"your Beauty!"

Blackberry kisses, within the celestial starlit mornings hour.... Stirring these passions aglow, amid the flickering flames of desire ~ Caressing such thoughts of you; smouldering embers, that burnish so very brightly! These ardent heated emotions; florids, of the blue oranges rising ~ Crossing the boundaries of a tomorrows promise.... Once thought to be but only, a forbiddens dream?! As I now feel your ivory breast, pressing softly to my burning heart Beating, beneath the magic of your silkened strawberry lips; moist ~ Burying this arrow of our light, gently, inside of thee.... To gather your cries, as you reach for the sky And arch as a bow, your life; pouring its pleasures Upon this world of my own, soul! Tasting now your glistening sweetened nectars; ripe While twirling unto the delight, of such joyous and piercing prose.... These mounds of vanillas creams, melting, their flavours into me Entangled, within this fairy tales maze, of your alluring eyes ~ Which consume my very being, with the breath, of your beautiful gaze! Intensely dissolving these walls once built; like painted clay, inside of a broken kiln.... This barrier now breached, by your majestically perfect smile ~ To become but a flowing river once more, of glittering and sparkling currents Beneath your rainbows colours, of everything, that was forever meant to be!? This tenderness of your touch, as soft as a whitened doves; smooth and subtle.... Quenching my deepest thirst; as you engrave your longing nails Of rosebud scarlet, into the cores of my no longer bleeding, searching heart! Dripping with its desires for you; pulsing and exploding, inside.... Mesmerized, by your presence; and cast, upon the shores of your love ~ As the candle light glows, afore these shadows that dance; their enchanting trance And the silhouettes sway, beneath their yellowish moon.... Aflame, amid your igniting embrace; while you stroke these fires, that burn Yearn, for only you and you alone; your light, and your touch ~ The very essence which breathes this life, your life, profoundly, inside of me! Within these blackberry kisses; dreams, of a tomorrows horizon Now thriving, atop the crystals waters, of this sea of love.... Pounding; throbbing; penetrating; tingling; the warmth of your breast, pressed Eternity, upon the tip of my tongue; your sugar laced taste ~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "Your Beauty!"

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Date: 8/6/2010 8:27:00 PM
your flowing lines would entice any woman and inspire any man to enjoy and respect the emotions that you place so carefully in your written word,truly this is a beautiful expression of deep love and devotion.I do indeed want to welcome you although you have been here a while, since this is my first pleasure in reading your words, I look forward to more,and I want to Thank You for leaving such wonderful words, upon mine,,Blessings..Cecil
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Date: 7/26/2010 5:16:00 PM
Wow...this was incredible writing. I felt the intense emotion which I seek when I read others poems. I could feel as you and see through your eyes.. Truly great writing.
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Date: 7/1/2010 12:45:00 AM
This is so passionate, my dear John! "blackberry kisses" -this is so sweet, it makes my heart tingle:) Kisses, Emily
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Date: 6/3/2010 4:22:00 AM
All I can say is AMAZING! Thank you. Jodie
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Date: 6/1/2010 9:48:00 PM
Well John your words enthrall me and your comments entice me into making firends with u on Soup and its a pleasure to meet u and read your poetry... your compliments are quite exquisite and u are very gentlemanly .. u can also comment on my latest blog too ... u have the option as a member on Soup... so any assistance u may need please feel free to ask .. and hope to read u daily now John... as I see many of my friends do.. lovely evening from the "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..luv..
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Date: 5/30/2010 1:30:00 PM
Very emotive and descriptive passionate write..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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Date: 5/28/2010 2:59:00 PM
Good heavens, what an intense ride this was!! Very sensual but not in a bad way. In a very romantic way. Very beautiful! LUv Andrea
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Date: 5/28/2010 5:27:00 AM
wonderful, enjoyed the poem, for the Third time. also thank you for the wonderful comments. Hope to enjoy more poetry of yours,..p.d.
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Date: 5/28/2010 12:49:00 AM
I could not help but think Have I read and comment on this already, (sorry!) it just happens to be that at times my comments up and vanish. However I love the whole flavor of the poem. It is beyond words I would love to use on the soup. By the way thank you for the kind comments you left on my poetry, always,..p.d.
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Date: 5/26/2010 8:25:00 AM
breath taking, love it wow! the perfect words all in one poem. No dough you can rip a women soul with this one. A butter melt for some. The pleasure has been mine to read this poem on this fine day. A full beauty in the making, nice and sweet, mostly romantic beyond belief write. Enjoyed your comment and poem, keep cool,..p.d.
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Date: 5/24/2010 6:45:00 PM
John, so good to hear from you. Christ and I grow closer each day brother. I have truly come to appreciate life and all of its wonder. Love this poem again. YF4L, God Bless you John, mj
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Date: 5/17/2010 10:47:00 PM
Tnks John for your kind comments,I'm happy you are back to Our family soup site...Hope all is well with you and hope you'll be back to write,Your poetry is one of the best here..and I learnt a lot from you,plus you were always so loyal to my writes...Charma
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Date: 5/17/2010 8:59:00 PM
Omg! wow! Wll...I am speechless...I had to go check out this kind poet who was leaving kind, warm, comments on my work..and tell you the truth..your cool!! Thanks for leaving those comments, John Rhinem...I enjoyed this and will read more..One question, though..since your last post was in 2009..surely you must have written something since then? Sorry my Soup Mail feature doesn't work, hence the long comment here.Thanks again..will read more..Peace, Audrey
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Date: 5/16/2010 6:07:00 PM
this is a beautiful poem, i think i will favorite this, you speak of a true beauty within, and that is always an outstanding thing to write about.very romantic as well, beautiful & passionate imagery.i love the way you form your long poems.i hope you do write more soon, and hear from you as a new poet friend. thank you for you kind comments -Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 5/16/2010 3:24:00 AM
Hi John, it's so nice to see you visiting the Soup again. I've missed hearing from you. I have had some blows lately, but am so glad to see your presence here again. Hope that things have been going better for you in recent months. Why don't you write a haiku/senryu for my contest? I just posted it yesterday but 20 of the 30 entries have been submitted. I'd like to read your work again. Wishing you the best always! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/7/2010 9:28:00 AM
It's impossable for you to write a poem that isn't fantastic! It's been too long, but I'm finally back on the soup!
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Date: 12/17/2009 11:13:00 PM
very descriptive, lots of thought went into this
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Date: 11/4/2009 1:08:00 AM
A ravenous, hungered, depth of passion and love for one so special...a delight to have been able to share. Just beautiful elegance. Anna-Marie.
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Date: 10/15/2009 11:39:00 AM
Jhon Beautif poem you have much desire within this write Blessings
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Date: 10/15/2009 6:21:00 AM
wow, got all the ladies going... hmmm... is this like, fornication?
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Date: 9/10/2009 5:40:00 AM
Deep and beautiful words of love in this very passionate write, dear friend! I have missed your words. I hope you are well. I see I have much catching up to do! Song of Solomon 2:1-3 GBY always. Love Robin
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Date: 8/17/2009 10:29:00 AM
Wow John Mr John you have out done yourself smoking fire melting tar ohhhhhh wooooooo Such a passionate man you are indeed! So hot you made my nose bleed! Soft and serene flowing sugar into a dream! WOW I love this one! Love Laura :)
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Date: 8/15/2009 10:13:00 AM
This is a hot poem. The lines are so passionate. You are verry talented. keep pushing out great work.
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Date: 8/15/2009 10:13:00 AM
This is a hot poem. The lines are so passionate. You are verry talented. keep pushing out great work.
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Date: 8/14/2009 4:18:00 PM
=] This is such a beautiful poem. I absolutely LOVE the last line... it gave me shivers. "Eternity upon the tip of my tongue; your sugar laced taste." Passionate and rich with talent. Well done, John =] Micaela
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