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Your Absence- a Nightmare and An Absolute Disaster

Your chase! Reminiscing on the oceans I had to dry up and the volcanos I had to ice up just to capture the epicenter of your heart well protected by strong canines of your carnivorous standards. Hanging with the clouds of the highest heights and combating with the dragons of the Amazon Forest was worth all the efforts. Your Love! shines in vitality attracting even the goddess of sexuality as it preserves the indwelling desires of two hearts. We stayed isolated in the entire world at midnight, siting on the mountain top the moon directly above us showcasing our shadows melted together with no space in between. The stars, singing hymns of love while the trees danced to the romantic melody. Just the two of us and the entire universe bridged by space full of your praise as I behold my Queen. Whose beauty compresses the wealth of Europe and gentleness makes the Dove and the River team up in envy. Your absence! Life endeavours have fixed putting us in an equilibrium of distance as I perish in a state; psychiatry has no definition. In the midst of Adult Buffalos you leave an unprotected Cub. You aren't gone, just far away yet I feel like a member of a loser's club as love has converted me to a scrub. Thinking I'd be as worse as a depression endemic atmophere with loneliness and plutonic cold its major contents, unfortunately, my heart is its suburb completely eaten up and infected. What can make me lay for days in the bathub; rejecting everything beautiful and lovely, and the ointment of darkness I rub? To all these my Love! Your absence is the nub. But I need to stay strong as I await the purification of your presence once again.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/17/2014 3:53:00 AM
Punching myself as to why I never visited your work before, this is beautiful Funom, absolutely......
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Date: 3/5/2014 10:49:00 PM
Funom, Your work is always so so deep, and strong..... Always looking forward... SKAT
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Funom Makama
Date: 3/6/2014 7:46:00 AM
wow! Thanks a lot SKAT A
Date: 3/2/2014 4:51:00 PM
A beautifully passionate and powerfully emotional write, Funom. Feels as though you are bruised, but in no way incurably wounded, for you have hope! Without love, hope and dreams we would be but empty shells. Hope all is well with you! Mikki
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Funom Makama
Date: 3/3/2014 7:09:00 AM
Thanks so so much for your kind words..
Date: 3/1/2014 4:29:00 PM
I enjoyed reading both the poem and accompanying comments. The praise for this piece are well deserved. very effective imagery.
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Funom Makama
Date: 3/2/2014 2:43:00 AM
Thank you Richard
Date: 3/1/2014 10:50:00 AM
This is incredible. Im left speachless. beautiful
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Funom Makama
Date: 3/1/2014 3:04:00 PM
Thanks a lot Jay Loveless
Date: 3/1/2014 7:53:00 AM
That's one powerful love ;) Light & Love
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Funom Makama
Date: 3/1/2014 9:53:00 AM
Thanks a lot Debbie Guzzi
Date: 3/1/2014 2:46:00 AM
ohhh my, an explosion of the senses with beautiful enjambment of images... ride on and ake waves, funom.. incredible!.. huggs
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Funom Makama
Date: 3/1/2014 9:53:00 AM
oohhh! Thanks a lot nette onclaud.. I really appreciate your comments
Date: 2/28/2014 9:54:00 PM
This is absolutely a very beautifully sad poem my dear friend Funom. You write very well. I like your poem so much. Thanks a lot for sharing! Thank you so much as well for your nice comments on my poem. Have a blessed weekend! love and hugs, Leonora
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Funom Makama
Date: 3/1/2014 9:53:00 AM
Thank you so much Leonora Galinta
Date: 2/28/2014 7:49:00 PM
I've missed you for sometimes now,a great one you have here.Simply brilliant.
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Funom Makama
Date: 3/1/2014 9:52:00 AM
Thanks Kayod5
Date: 2/28/2014 5:41:00 PM
Very descriptive work using some good metaphoric language..Enjoyed reading this one today...Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Funom Makama
Date: 3/1/2014 9:52:00 AM
Thanks a lot Sara
Date: 2/28/2014 3:07:00 PM
- A really well written poem, Funom ! - Wish you a nice weekend - Stay strong ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/28/2014 3:14:00 PM
Thanks Anne, I do not have a choice than to stay strong!
Date: 2/28/2014 2:11:00 PM
Absolutely brilliant. Thanks for making my day. I have found it pleasurable to always begin the weekend with Poetrysoup because poets like you and poems like this do not disappoint. Have a lovely weekend
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/28/2014 3:12:00 PM
Thanks Cyndi MacMillan
Date: 2/28/2014 1:43:00 PM
Awesome write!!!
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/28/2014 3:11:00 PM
Thanks a lot Pace
Date: 2/28/2014 1:10:00 PM
Emphatic the meeting and the parting. Well titled.
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/28/2014 3:11:00 PM
Yeah John and I hope to meet with her soon. Her absence is really killing me!
Date: 2/28/2014 12:56:00 PM
Very romantic, in a strong way. Absence makes the heart hunger for what it's missing.
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/28/2014 3:10:00 PM
Yeah Paul.. You are right! I am a thousand miles away from my love, I miss her so so much and this prompted this poem. Thanks for stopping by

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