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Young Love

sweet roses by the cottage door sunlight on the kitchen floor his soft glance says "I adore" young love needs little more.. for the SWEET contest

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/6/2012 5:47:00 AM

Congrats on your win in Francine's "Short and Sweet" contest Barbara. Love, Carol

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 12/29/2011 9:13:00 PM

Dreamy, tender and sweet....congrats on your win!

Francine Roberts

Date: 12/29/2011 7:00:00 PM

congrats on your 4th place win Barbara, wonderfully romantic piece

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/29/2011 6:19:00 PM

I loved it the first time, Barbara. Congrats on your win.

Kim Merryman

Date: 12/29/2011 4:45:00 PM

Lovely, Barbara. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Kash Poet

Date: 12/29/2011 12:26:00 PM

Very sweet Barbara.Congratulations on your win

David Williams

Date: 12/29/2011 9:19:00 AM

Barbara congrats on your win..David

Joyce Johnson

Date: 12/29/2011 9:08:00 AM

So true Barbara. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/28/2011 12:31:00 PM

Isn't it the truth, LNC? Young people haven't been jaded by bad experiences so they feel love more freely. Great entry for Francine's "Sweet" contest. You're always a winner in my book. Love from your fellow LNC.

Debra Squyres

Date: 12/28/2011 9:06:00 AM

Absolutely love this !!

Joe Maverick

Date: 12/28/2011 7:14:00 AM

Yes Barbara..i'll go along with that i wonder if this poem reflects just a little of Heavens store..?

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/27/2011 9:00:00 PM

Ah, yes, love and a cottage. So simple. So romantic!! Hope it scores high!!

Robert Pettit

Date: 12/27/2011 9:00:00 PM

I could just hear Tab Hunter singing his hit song from yesteryear which shares the same title. Good luck with this one, Barbara.