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Young Love



sweet roses by the cottage door
sunlight on the kitchen floor
his soft glance says "I adore"
young love needs little more..


for the SWEET contest

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Carol Sunshine Brown

January 6, 2012 at 5:47 AM

Congrats on your win in Francine's "Short and Sweet" contest Barbara. Love, Carol

Cecilia Macfarlane

December 29, 2011 at 9:13 PM

Dreamy, tender and sweet....congrats on your win!

Francine Roberts

December 29, 2011 at 7:00 PM

congrats on your 4th place win Barbara, wonderfully romantic piece

Andrea Dietrich

December 29, 2011 at 6:19 PM

I loved it the first time, Barbara. Congrats on your win.

Kim Merryman

December 29, 2011 at 4:45 PM

Lovely, Barbara. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Kash Poet

December 29, 2011 at 12:26 PM

Very sweet Barbara.Congratulations on your win

David Williams

December 29, 2011 at 9:19 AM

Barbara congrats on your win..David

Joyce Johnson

December 29, 2011 at 9:08 AM

So true Barbara. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Carolyn Devonshire

December 28, 2011 at 12:31 PM

Isn't it the truth, LNC? Young people haven't been jaded by bad experiences so they feel love more freely. Great entry for Francine's "Sweet" contest. You're always a winner in my book. Love from your fellow LNC.