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Young Elder and Death

Young: After I am being born I crawl at home with my soft small legs and little fingers help me I try to stand up but fall and fall My lovely mother watches me with her sweet smile comes near me and talks with me rubs my head with her beautiful hands my innocent baby life grows up Elder: After I am being grown up I want myself to be a perfect human being with proper education having all round development My love life family life and social life be full of all beauties with the blessings of God I want I go ahead with the time Death: After being an old man I feel Whatever I have got out of my whole life's experiences at the end I must meet with doom space is my home I am living with no physical body but peace only peace is there I never found on earth there ends all gloom Sponsored by: Craig Cornish

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Date: 7/8/2013 10:37:00 AM
This is wonderful and so beautiful bl. Good luck in the contest
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Date: 7/7/2013 8:54:00 PM
Transformation described well in your words, BL..good luck with the contest :)))
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Bl Devnath
Date: 7/8/2013 8:53:00 AM
Thanks a lot again for reading my write and for your lovely comment. Loved always, bl
Date: 7/7/2013 5:26:00 PM
Ah yes the grub he stumbles all through life, but death does make a change, the flapping of spirit angel wings, the one God has arranged....
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Bl Devnath
Date: 7/8/2013 8:54:00 AM
Hi! my genius friend, you are always so. Thanks......,loved always, bl
Date: 7/6/2013 10:04:00 PM
I like the poem, and the stage you propose for the readers,,, good luck in the contest BL., have yourself a good night... Linda
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Bl Devnath
Date: 7/6/2013 10:23:00 PM
A lot thanks from my heart goes to you for putting nice remarks on my write and for wishing me good luck here. Have wonderful weekend. Loved always, bl

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