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You'Ll Get Back, What You'Ve Given Me

You came to me, like a drifting breeze, and shared your love so tenderly. Loving you with open arms, looking for love, that I had longed. You took away my lonesome heart, and gave my life a brand new start. The winds they changed, I don't know (repeat) why. Thought it was love, was I surprised. (repeat) She said, "I'm sorry hon, I must move on. Don't be sad, you'll find someone." My heart and soul you stole from me and now you walk away so free. I can't look back, there is too much pain. I'll try and love and trust again. I walk alone, this lonesome road, and want my heart back that you stole. Life isn't fair you wait and see. You'll get (repeat) Total 2 times back, what you've given me. Michael Tor (song)

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Angie Thomas

Date: 11/18/2015 9:18:00 AM

i can totally relate to what you're going though in these verses... the exact same thing happened to me this month... it hurts so much...but the belief that we will recover is what keep us going right? :)

Angie Thomas
Date: 11/20/2015 6:10:00 AM

Aww.. Thank you micheal... it makes it so much worse when you finally think that he's different from the rest.... :'( but I'm doing okay.... I hope you have great holidays too :) ^-^

Michael Tor
Date: 11/19/2015 3:57:00 PM

Hi Angie I am so sorry this happened to you. This is awful. I hope you have support from your loved ones. You are correct this is what keeps us going. Angie someone better will be with you before you know it. Be patient though make sure you have someone that is sincere and honest. God bless you and I hope you will have happy holidays in spite of your loss.

James Inman

Date: 11/13/2015 8:01:00 AM

I can hear the tune ringing in my head Michael. Very nice.

Michael Tor
Date: 11/15/2015 7:56:00 PM

Thank you James.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/11/2015 7:13:00 PM

a sad one, Michael. Good for a country singer!!

Michael Tor
Date: 11/12/2015 1:24:00 AM

lol. I want it to be rock. Your right though Andrea lol. Thank you for your sweet comment..

Iris E. S-Lewis

Date: 11/11/2015 3:59:00 PM

I like everything about your song, for it is positively creative therapy as a matter of fact; and that's that.

Michael Tor
Date: 11/11/2015 6:48:00 PM

Thank you Iris thanks for stopping by my Dear. Thank you for your kind comments.

Tim Smith

Date: 11/11/2015 3:28:00 PM

Nice song Michael...love the ending line

Michael Tor
Date: 11/11/2015 6:45:00 PM

Thanks Tim good luck going up against Sir Jackson.

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 11/11/2015 12:06:00 PM

Wow! What a lovely and excellent poem. Your wonderful write flows smoothly within my heart. A brilliant lyric.............A.M.

Michael Tor
Date: 11/11/2015 6:09:00 PM

Thank you Afolabi for your kind comments my friend.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 11/11/2015 7:05:00 AM

A romantic heart easily can turn its feelings into a song for heartbeats become notes of a melody composed by love, my brother Michael! Superb and a seven+.

Michael Tor
Date: 11/11/2015 11:51:00 AM

Thank you Demetrios for your thoughtful comments. God Bless you.

Joan Donnelly Ellis

Date: 11/11/2015 5:20:00 AM

As goes the song: "Only love can break a heart, only love can mend it again". May yours be mended soon-hugs

Michael Tor
Date: 11/11/2015 11:50:00 AM

Hi Joan I wrote this for our Rock band. Thank you for your caring comment. I'm glad your back.

Lin Lane

Date: 11/11/2015 4:02:00 AM

g'morning, Michael. I can sing this. Very well done.

Lin Lane
Date: 11/11/2015 4:10:00 AM

So you do write music...how wonderful....Early rising has been my pattern for a long time, but I like the quiet mornings.

Michael Tor
Date: 11/11/2015 4:05:00 AM

Hi Lin good morning Dear you are an early bird. I couldnt sleep. I had to come up with a song we are putting to music. Thank you for your kind comments. Have a wonderful day, and be blessed.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/11/2015 3:50:00 AM

- A song with emotion, Michael - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Michael Tor
Date: 11/11/2015 4:07:00 AM

Thanks Anne-Lise. We have to put it to music now. Thanks for visiting. I hope you have a great day.

Skat A

Date: 11/11/2015 3:36:00 AM

Yes, Michael, karma will get her back. A sad song, yet I love your rap. No need in looking back. HUGS. SKAT

Michael Tor
Date: 11/11/2015 4:08:00 AM

Thanks Skat. Now I have to put it to music. Thanks for visiting.