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You'Ll Be Skeleton Thin

Well tickle me bum and call me Lucy Got really great news, pay attention, it's juicy Seems to lose some weight All you need do is wait Eventually you'll be skelton thin, quite spooky © Jack Ellison 2015

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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 4/22/2015 6:18:00 AM
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ooooh spooky indeed. Another great limerick dear poet! : ) Always, Laura
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Jack Ellison
Date: 4/22/2015 6:20:00 AM
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You always come back with love! I need it! Huggsies, Jack xxx
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Judy Konos
Date: 4/13/2015 10:53:00 PM
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Big huggeroonies..back at ya Jack!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 4/14/2015 7:55:00 AM
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Ha! You're speaking my language, dear Judy!!! HUGGEROONIES! Love ya, Jackles xxx
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Carol Eastman
Date: 4/13/2015 8:27:00 AM
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First time I started mowing the lawn I thought it might help me lose weight... All that exercise... then the exhausted nappie poo time... too tired to make it to the fridge... I think I gained weight thru osmosis or my dreams... Hubby agreed... LOL... Silly Hubby!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 4/13/2015 8:31:00 AM
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Gained weight over the winter... must work off my pudginess! LOL xxx
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 4/13/2015 4:25:00 AM
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Isn't that the easy way out? Oh well, it does leave room for enjoying life to the fullest! Great one, Jack.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 4/13/2015 8:30:00 AM
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"FULLEST!!!" You got it! I have certainly filled out! Hugs, Jack xxx
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John Williams
Date: 4/13/2015 4:15:00 AM
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Well written Jack. Very clever but not a recommended way to lose weight. No way of enjoying it. Kind regards---John
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Jack Ellison
Date: 4/13/2015 7:08:00 AM
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Just having a little fun, my friend! LOL Thanks for dropping by... have a good one!
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Viv Wigley
Date: 4/12/2015 11:23:00 PM
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A fine verse, make no bones about it. Viv
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Jack Ellison
Date: 4/13/2015 7:06:00 AM
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Clever response my man!!! LOL Jack
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/12/2015 4:41:00 PM
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Hmm, maybe wait for days, er maybe Months?? (and not eating!!) fun one.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 4/12/2015 6:29:00 PM
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Hey dear one! I'm really appreciating your visits! Thanks Andrea! Love, Jack xxx
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/12/2015 7:08:00 AM
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I think this poem is 'thin' by one line Jack lol:-) Hugs jan xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/12/2015 7:17:00 AM
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ha ha ha - made me giggle! Do drop by visit me some time:-) Hugs jan xx
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Jack Ellison
Date: 4/12/2015 7:12:00 AM
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Oops! Take another gander! LOL Hugs Jack xxx

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