You Will See

YOU WILL SEE It all started with an apple One simple little bite Giving all the love we got do not walk towards the light We already gave it our best shot This is more than good night Destine has picked out our slot Paradise might not be a beauty of a sight Fire and brimstone will be a different hot you will see, Your body will slowly rot Ready or not its to late to give it your best shot six feet under at the end is all we got you will see, we pass the ages of the flood we had the time to enjoy and be free now we live the days blood for blood you will see, in this world you have nothing left you will see, it will all end in death Breeding on lust and greed till the day we take our last breath you will lay and rest in peace That is the only thing, you will see I.T. S.K.A.T.

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Dalia Shahein

Date: 1/4/2016 8:16:00 PM

Beautiful touchy poem my dear , great write as usual hugs....// :)

Abhinandan Subba

Date: 11/30/2015 12:50:00 AM

speechless...

Paul Callus

Date: 11/28/2015 3:38:00 PM

This is a subject that many dread talking about, but it's an inevitable reality and has to be faced. I believe in an afterlife, otherwise what scope would our visit on earth have? Hugs // paul

Faten Ishak

Date: 10/6/2015 12:57:00 AM

Hi skat i am really impressed when i stop by your nice poem , i enjoy reading it , so simple and deep Have a nice day Faten ishak

Robin Davis

Date: 3/1/2014 1:53:00 PM

SKAT What a deep and intense write. You've penned a great write on a topic that happens and no one can stop it. Nicely done Thanks for the great comment on my Scum poem.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/15/2013 10:46:00 PM

Skat, I just saw your winner list. thanks for my placement. Glad you liked my "fancy" girl.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/7/2013 12:29:00 AM

no!

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 11/12/2012 11:06:00 AM

Flipping through your poetry and so glad I found this piece. Your a wonder dear beautiful poet. Hugs n more xoxo Michael

Anthony Beesley

Date: 8/24/2010 7:35:00 AM

very pointed and punctuated...someone just got defated

David Byrne

Date: 7/29/2010 7:34:00 PM

great!

Edward Orozco

Date: 5/24/2010 9:22:00 PM

beautiful poem! its you whom my lines are for, in every beautiful heart i grow- edward

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/10/2010 10:22:00 AM

great work here dear friend,I'm so happy for you,you deserve sme pampering dear and lights in hair in summer look cool- :) Now all you need is a towel and to the beach,lol.Charma

Izzy Gumbo

Date: 5/7/2010 7:39:00 AM

Well written Irma! Powerful, raw... I met Death once, with his guy Chance... if you encounter them, offer a beer and a smile, there's more hope always, then we know. Brilliant expressions my friend. :)

Gert W. Knop

Date: 5/6/2010 4:25:00 AM

I thought I read your poem and commented it, but I was wrong! Your write sounds sad, but you are to right! Nothing will remain at the end, Irma! Thanks for your comments...Gert

Billy Thekidster

Date: 5/4/2010 1:00:00 PM

Roses R Red, Violets R Blue. Irma, you never cease to amaze you're Kiddy-Poo. Another great write written by you.

Royal Trevino

Date: 5/2/2010 10:41:00 PM

remarkable:)

Audrey Haick

Date: 5/1/2010 3:44:00 PM

Tough write, Irma...calls for introspection, deep...but all my hope is in the one who controls every situation,,eveb death and beyond..Thanks for the comments! Love, Audrey

Faleshia Murphy

Date: 5/1/2010 11:40:00 AM

nice write but such a sad read well done faleshia

Katherine Stella

Date: 5/1/2010 7:15:00 AM

for this reason I try to be nice to mr death for I don't want his company anytime soon I rather invision my family who already passed in my dreams only for I still have a young child who needs me also so gotta stay healthy at least try too great write this should be told around a campfire thanks for sharing and for your kind comments to my work sweet blessings

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/1/2010 3:31:00 AM

Great write that you have penned in this one about a topic that we all will have to face but most don't want to talk about it...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara

Gert W. Knop

Date: 5/1/2010 3:10:00 AM

We all will end with death and from our birth on the clock is ticking! But what we created during our life will last and we will live on in the heart of our love ones...Well penned, Irma! Keep your pen flowing!...And thank you for your comments..Gert

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/30/2010 9:13:00 PM

right back at you L.) the only thing you will see, is life is not always what it seems to be. later,..p.d.

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 4/30/2010 7:56:00 PM

the beginning of life as we know it...I did not mean to offend anyone with my poem about MLK. I just want everyone to check out the facts for themselves...that is all. I voted for Bush but I don't agree with everything he did. ya know?

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/30/2010 7:20:00 PM

Hey, girlie, you are waxing all theological on us now?? haha.(that's what I was doing today too with my IN Retro poem) WEird as this sounds, even thogh I believe in the afterlife, sometimes I find myself kind of wishing that the last breath really would be my last. And yet i know we go on. Of that I am very certain.(You Will See) But maybe HOW we go on will take everybody by surprise. I enjoyed this one. Great flow, and thought provoking. LUv, Andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/30/2010 6:59:00 PM

A nice beginning...it all started with an apple. YOu have said it all