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You Will Always Be My Girl

Me and you without a clue Of half the things that we'll go through From early morn till late at night Side-by-side through this life Riding high this Tilt-A-Whirl You will always be my girl Up and down in and out Both of us squarely spinning round Clearly not a piece of cake Making do with the desserts we make A many-faceted diamond, rounded pearl I'm so blessed that you're my girl Grooming all we know with a fine-tooth comb Then placing a bow on our happy home It's our belief that sets us free And I believe in you and me Whatever goes down in this crazy world You will always be my girl

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Date: 8/20/2023 6:13:00 AM
I love your writing very much. Kindly continue writing.
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Date: 2/26/2022 12:37:00 PM
This is such a sweet love poem. Nice rhythm and flow. Take care!
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Date: 3/14/2021 7:48:00 PM
Cherished ode to your love! jmg
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Date: 10/25/2020 1:42:00 PM
Hey Mike.. long time no see. Hope you are well.
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Date: 3/3/2020 6:47:00 PM
I read your poems where you post them, but can’t leave a comment there, so I’m letting you know here that they’re great., some of them are very funny. Please respond here, so I’ll know the compliment got through
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Date: 2/21/2020 10:56:00 AM
And this will always be one of our favorite poems. Well done.
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Date: 11/15/2019 10:10:00 AM
I found you on hello poetry. I get to catch up on your terrific poems
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Date: 9/2/2019 10:56:00 AM
A whirlwind of a happy life!
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Date: 7/5/2019 7:23:00 PM
Love it Mike, I concur...this sounds like something I would write!
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Date: 7/5/2019 12:10:00 PM
What a happy poem! I enjoyed it so much.
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