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You Will Always Be My First

You have the most stunning eyes, an elegance I recognize- but... Your disposition is full of more splendor than any feature you could render- I utterly surrender You have the most resounding kiss, I am stuck in love’s abyss- but... Your heart brings more pleasure than any riches or treasure- I love you beyond measure Feed me while I starve for you, quench me when I thirst- Bring me passion so true and new, for you will always be my first May 30, 2018

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Date: 6/2/2018 10:16:00 PM
Congrats on your top win, Laura.
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Date: 5/31/2018 8:06:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful love poem!
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Date: 5/31/2018 4:48:00 PM
A beautiful touching poem, sweet Luloo, congrats on your win. John
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Date: 5/31/2018 4:27:00 PM
A lovely love poem, dear Luloo! Congrats! Hugs..Kim
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Date: 5/31/2018 1:43:00 AM
Very well penned, Laura. Brings out the passion so well.
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Date: 5/30/2018 7:33:00 PM
Wow! Two lucky souls:) This is a beauty, Laura:)
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Date: 5/30/2018 2:13:00 PM
Real love...Nicely expressed...All the best Laura Loo
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