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You Were Thinking of Me

While you molded the mountains, while you formed the sea. While you painted the rainbow, you were thinking of me. When I was just a baby, cradled in my Mother's arms. You held us both in your hands and kept us safe from harm. Sometimes I walked with grace, other times I had to crawl. No matter the path taken, there you were, to guide me through it all. Now that I'm much older and my life is near the end. I find some comfort knowing, on the other side I have a friend. 1/17/2022

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Date: 7/5/2022 9:12:00 AM
This is really really nice, Wren. I love it!
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Date: 2/11/2022 1:37:00 AM
Good one, Wren. Lovely piece.
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Date: 1/23/2022 6:42:00 PM
This beauty inspires the soul Wren. Blessings xxoo
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Wren Rushing
Date: 1/24/2022 5:17:00 PM
Thank you Connie!
Date: 1/19/2022 8:09:00 AM
Wren, this is a glorious write! I teared up reading this one. He was thinking of us! The majesty of the mountains, rainbows, sea, all made with man in mind. And the mind of God that could run the universe, and yet know the number of hairs on our heads. This is a FAV for me! :)
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