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You Were There

I like to think that you were there when muezzin trills called to prayer. Calm stillness drifted in au clair, my thoughts were pining on the air. I like to think that you were there as pastel-colored skies so rare unfolded day's soft morning glare. A comfort holding no compare. I like to think that you were there in uniform, so debonaire! A dream of mine and yours to share. We two were one, a single pair. Desert winds shifted sandbars bare with hateful, boastful, intense flare. As I stand in hypnotic stare, I like to think that you were there.

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Date: 3/5/2025 9:20:00 AM
I love monorhymes, they are difficult, though seem easy, great job here, love your vocab always - au clair, debonaire,wow!!:)
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 3/6/2025 8:46:00 AM
Thanks my friend. We should collab soon. :)
Date: 2/11/2025 11:37:00 PM
Well I was not so there.!! Lol))) but someone Was?? Or more than one.?? You will have thinking for hours.'
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 3/2/2025 9:22:00 AM
Where oh where art thou, Joe-eo? Figured it out yet? Many thanks!:)
Date: 2/11/2025 8:32:00 AM
beautiful poem, elle!
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 2/11/2025 8:55:00 AM
Thanks dave. Hope all is good with you. :)
Date: 2/10/2025 12:56:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your creative "you were there" write. Have a blessed day writing away................
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 2/10/2025 5:00:00 PM
Thanks Paula, my friend. :)

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