You Were There

I like to think that you were there
when muezzin trills called to prayer.
Calm stillness drifted in au clair,
my thoughts were pining on the air.

I like to think that you were there
as pastel-colored skies so rare
unfolded day's soft morning glare.
A comfort holding no compare.

I like to think that you were there
in uniform, so debonaire!
A dream of mine and yours to share.
We two were one, a single pair.

Desert winds shifted sandbars bare
with hateful, boastful, intense flare.
As I stand in hypnotic stare,
I like to think that you were there.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Daniel Avatar
March 5, 2025 at 9:20 AM
I love monorhymes, they are difficult, though seem easy, great job here, love your vocab always - au clair, debonaire,wow!!:)
Fowler Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 8:46 AM
Thanks my friend. We should collab soon. :)
Maverick Avatar
February 11, 2025 at 11:37 PM
Well I was not so there.!! Lol))) but someone Was?? Or more than one.?? You will have thinking for hours.'
Fowler Avatar
March 2, 2025 at 9:22 AM
Where oh where art thou, Joe-eo? Figured it out yet? Many thanks!:)
Crandall Avatar
February 11, 2025 at 8:32 AM
beautiful poem, elle!
Fowler Avatar
February 11, 2025 at 8:55 AM
Thanks dave. Hope all is good with you. :)
Goldsmith Avatar
February 10, 2025 at 12:56 PM
I enjoyed reading your creative "you were there" write. Have a blessed day writing away................
Fowler Avatar
February 10, 2025 at 5:00 PM
Thanks Paula, my friend. :)
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