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You Transform Me

When my enticed eyes look at you My heart pulsates with the cadence new My soul absorbs your essence completely Suffusing my senses with the feeling of glee. Your alluring footprints I long to follow To embrace you all the way I will go When I feel void and alone, I stand At the edge of dark horizon in wasteland You raise for me the scarlet sun high Forever my love shines in dawn’s colored sky. In the scorched life listless and inert When I turn into a dry lake in desert You bring the soothing rains of bliss Make within me a sparkling oasis. Wandering lost in the vale of desolation I search for the missing passion In the abandoned channel meandering You flow the torrent of your yearning Make a cascading river of desire in me Surging ebullient to the rapturous sea. In burnt garden in the summer of despair When I appear as a rose bud nobody cares You bring rains and drench me in love shower Make me blossom as a beguiled radiant flower. _________________ January 3, 2022 Contest : Forever My Love Valentine Sponsor : BJ Legros Kelley

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Date: 2/11/2022 10:10:00 PM
Ahhhh Subimal, mixing romantic love with nature in metaphor is so enchanting. “You bring rains and drench me in love shower Make me blossom as a beguiled radiant flower.”. I adore it. Congratulations on your wonderful first place win my friend. Have a happy Valentine’s Day. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 2/9/2022 12:10:00 AM
Amazingly beautiful. Congratulations on your first-place win with this amazing gem of poetic brilliance. Thank you for entering it into this poetry contest, it is an honor to have read this gorgeous work of artistic beauty!
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Date: 1/3/2022 8:10:00 AM
I love
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