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These are a few words that I have scribbled on a page To help me not feel so enraged Angry I am that I trusted you Yet you too left me feeling neglected abused You who promised to take my pain away To help me forget the heartache of my days In your arms I fell for refuge Trusting that you would be true I wanted to forget my past To no longer feel like broken glass I once more wanted to be whole So much so that I let my logic go I looked over all the signs and red flags Because I was so tired of feeling like trash But my broken heart I could not mask My vulnerability Left my heart in pure nudity You promised not to treat me with such brutality Brutal and futile was this effort for love Now I hope to long for you no more I will just have to pick myself up off the floor No more will I rush into the arms of a man Just to get over feelings I can’t stand For I must love myself in order to withstand The search for companionship my lifelong relationship and love that will bring me bliss ak 8/22/10

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Date: 3/26/2016 9:40:00 PM
Sheena beena, you've expressed yourself well, I like the way you ended the poem. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry when you have time. Happy Easter ** LOVE LINDA
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Date: 8/10/2015 7:06:00 PM
ENJOYING THIS ONE AGAIN... SKAT
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Date: 8/25/2010 6:54:00 PM
Hey Shenna, fall into my arms, ha ha ha. it is a pity, I have seen this happen over the years and I feel sorry for those girls that fall cheaply for the wrong guys. I cry for them in my heart. please don't let emotions get you off your feet again try to love with your head before your heart takes over... and forget about the past so you won't chase the right man away. Welcome to Poetry Soup, feel free to relate with all poets. keep writing great poems. Love always, Adeleke
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Date: 8/23/2010 5:11:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Sheena. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/22/2010 6:30:00 PM
It is a nice free verse write love and its frustration and yearning, Sheena.
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Date: 8/22/2010 5:49:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your very creative write tonight..looking forward to many more..with luv..
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Date: 8/22/2010 5:43:00 PM
VERY DEEP SHEENA~SKAT
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