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You Think You are not strong You are always wrong You are going nowhere You are no good to me Well my dear come over here What you think is not my concern What you say and do is up to you I am going out the door I am strong and I don’t need you anymore You are no good to me I am going somewhere I will be back in one hour you think Goodbye

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 6/18/2017 10:31:00 PM
wow, abrupt and definite. loved how this write drew me along to the full stop. great writing Niall.
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Niall Fulham
Date: 6/19/2017 3:44:00 AM
Hi Lewis , thanks for comment , too the end :)))))hugs
Date: 6/18/2017 8:56:00 PM
Wow . . . 'o'
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Niall Fulham
Date: 6/19/2017 3:44:00 AM
Thanks:)))
Date: 6/18/2017 12:36:00 PM
- A new chapter begins, Niall - Close and lock the door ... life is too short to be wasted - Well written - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Niall Fulham
Date: 6/18/2017 1:26:00 PM
Hi Anne-Lise , like that song ' I will survive ' :))))hugs
Date: 6/18/2017 12:22:00 PM
Focus on the door and walk right out... hehehe... hope you're doing good my friend, and stay strong. hugs :)
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Niall Fulham
Date: 6/18/2017 1:20:00 PM
I Akkina , I wanted to capture two people with one having enough lol:))))hugs
Date: 6/18/2017 8:34:00 AM
Goodbye indeed....Strong poem Niall, well expressed emotions. I love the poem although the subject is not fun...
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Niall Fulham
Date: 6/18/2017 1:18:00 PM
Hi Darren , You can't beat a good argument ,,lol :))))
Date: 6/17/2017 5:54:00 PM
Love the rhyme, I should try writing them. Glad you liked my Love Marilyn. She's my fav girl. I also wrote one called Beauty Queen :)
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Niall Fulham
Date: 6/17/2017 6:29:00 PM
Hi Debbie , thanks for comment ,, I will check out Beauty Queen thanks :)))hugs
Date: 6/17/2017 12:57:00 PM
Sometimes you have to be strong and don't look back.
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Niall Fulham
Date: 6/17/2017 1:05:00 PM
Hi Tim , hope your well , thank you for comment , :)))
Date: 6/17/2017 10:23:00 AM
Stone cold, Niall. When it's over, it's over.
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Niall Fulham
Date: 6/17/2017 12:16:00 PM
Hi Daniel , nice to meet , thanks for comment , it will always take two :)))

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