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You Tempt Me

You tempt me
As I sense your presence by my side
The whisper of your flowing silken dress
A whiff of fragrant jasmine scent.
 
You tempt me
With each flicker of your doe-brown eyes
Shadowed in lilac hues and full dark lashes
A smile, partly concealed on pouting lips.
 
You tempt me
With curvaceous waves of long black hair 
Cascading by glowing peach-rose cheeks  
Rising, falling on your breast with every breath. 
 
You tempt me
As you stand against the evening light
The Aphrodite of my dreams and fantasies
Seductive, alluring and desirable.
 
I temp you 
As gently I pull back my straying hair 
Nestled on the fullness of my breast
Exposing what your famished eyes are feasting on.
 
I tempt you
In silent expectation my body glows 
With purpose of fulfilment I slowly make my way to you
My haloed shadow dances on your rigid form.
 
I tempt you
Breathless, you lean against the wall
My desires surging at this sign of weakness
Within inches of your body, I languidly pause.
 
I tempt you
Sensuously, at satin ribbons my fingers pull 
Until my struggling gown hesitantly quivers 
Before it glides and gathers at my feet.
 
I tempt you
Grounded by wanton cravings, I look you in the eyes
I simply smoulder there within your reach 
The final vestige of abstinence still lingers in the air.
 
I tempt you
Then I lean in, my breath is warm upon your check 
Against your heaving chest my breasts now brush 
I breathe and whisper softly “Come to me.”
 
I tempt you
Inveigled in this rare moment, my heart bursts 
As you crush my body tightly against yours
You taste the temptress kiss that frees your needs.
 
I tempt you
For my heart has long been tempted
By strong unquenched desires 
For you.

A Repost of a collaboration with Paul Callus
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Anish Avatar
April 11, 2016 at 4:57 PM
Very sensuous poetry here! Nice image , too. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 10, 2016 at 5:27 AM
Wow...the two of you are magic! I love this sensuous piece Eileen and Paul! I feel as if I have just watched a steamy movie! Outstanding! #7. ; )
Hicks Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 10:12 PM
Not only sensual and playful ... but also powerful and strong with the way you switch perspectives like that. I've never read a poem that did that before, and I must say, it's much more captivating to get the other perspective in there! (it's two after all, and not one, that makes it magic) ... great collab you two!
Bordner Avatar
April 6, 2016 at 9:39 PM
You are the essence of seduction, the prize of refined passion my Beloved Poetess...a temptation of unlocking needs, "I simply smoulder there..." Mmmmmmmmmm........oh how you smoulder the flesh of pure desire. This is a masterpiece...J.A.B. A FAV!!!
Manassian Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 4:37 AM
Hello, Eagle....Nice to see you at my page. I loved your last piece. So beautiful....You are a symbol of passion and power. Lovely visit. Thanks. :)
J.T. Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 1:01 AM
I love the passion in this write. Good job to both you and Paul -JT
Manassian Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 9:52 PM
Thanks, dear. I enjoyed writing this one with him...glad you stopped by...
Dietrich Avatar
April 3, 2016 at 7:17 PM
wowowow, that is amazing sensuality from BOTH of you. I hope it was you doing the last part ? hahaha. VERY good writing, dearie!! And Paul as well.
Manassian Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 9:54 PM
Yup....it was your truly. Thanks for the visit...
Dietrich Avatar
April 3, 2016 at 7:17 PM
and ooh la la, that picture.
Manassian Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 9:53 PM
Yes....good one, isn't it...
Callus Avatar
April 3, 2016 at 3:12 PM
Wow! Still reads as good, or even more, now that I read it again after a long interval, Eileen! The passion is still as strong...so is the temptation! hugs // paul
Manassian Avatar
April 3, 2016 at 6:47 PM
Yes....to your last sentence. It's a piece to be proud of. Glad you came back to share it with me. Hugs
Tacito Avatar
April 3, 2016 at 11:15 AM
That is the most attractive wall I've ever seen. Now, my strongest temptation is to go to Home Depot and buy something to lay on the ground...because I know I "can do it"...and they "can help", or so their motto says. Yay, double entendres!
Manassian Avatar
April 3, 2016 at 6:46 PM
Yea....good one, Drake. I'm glad you're back. Been thinking of you. Glad you liked this piece. Hugs
Lamoureux Avatar
April 1, 2016 at 9:24 AM
Dropping by to say hi. Tell me more about your trip to Abbotsford.
Manassian Avatar
April 1, 2016 at 12:50 PM
I will....soon. Thanks for the visit. I have dates....trying to get time off from work. I'm getting excited. Told my sis-in-law that you'd try to see me...she was sure you would. She wants me to meet up with her sister and parents as well. I'll let you know more soon. Don't feel much like writing...Hugs
Turner Avatar
March 31, 2016 at 9:16 AM
Passionate and entrancing. A magnificent collaboration. Thoroughly enjoyed the read. Peace my friend:)
Manassian Avatar
March 31, 2016 at 4:21 PM
Thank you, Daniel. I've collaborated with Paul five times. It's been a wonderful experience to meet him a few days ago in Malta. I reposted in honor of that. Glad to be back. Thanks for the visit.
Lamoureux Avatar
March 30, 2016 at 5:55 PM
It's good to have the ooh la la hotness back again. You were missed. 777777!
Manassian Avatar
March 31, 2016 at 4:22 PM
Thanks, Richard. You're encouragement means so much...Hey, what are you doing in June? Want to meet up? ;)
Nance Avatar
March 30, 2016 at 12:41 PM
Love it!!! :)
Manassian Avatar
March 31, 2016 at 4:23 PM
:) Thanks, dear. Hugs
Smith Avatar
March 30, 2016 at 12:41 PM
Oh this is so passionate...I wish I would have wrote it : )....the line "The final vestige of abstinence still lingers in the air."...impeccable
Manassian Avatar
March 31, 2016 at 4:24 PM
Thanks, dear. That's a lovely compliment. I'm glad you liked this piece. Hugs
Chircop Avatar
March 30, 2016 at 12:33 PM
Beautiful,passionate and tempting...Oh that temptress kiss..and that whiff of Jasmine scent..Enchantimg !!! A fave .
Chircop Avatar
March 31, 2016 at 5:55 PM
Miss you too sweet lady..Sent you sme pics on gmail and email..:)
Manassian Avatar
March 31, 2016 at 4:25 PM
Thanks, Beautiful. I'm glad this struck your fancy....Hugs, sweetie. Oh...and MISS YOU and MALTA...
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