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You Take My Breath Away

Visions of you take my breath away How did I get so lucky? Is this a dream? I enjoy basking in your warm embrace Visions of you take my breath away Your touch sets my body and my soul on fire Loving you is my sacred endeavor, my love Visions of you take my breath away How can the honeymoon stage last so long? We've been together for a long time, my love And you still manage to take my breath away 10/28/19 Alexis Y.

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 11/16/2019 2:18:00 PM

Hello Alexis Y. This is a romantic love poem for someone special. have a nice day my friend.

Sandra Adams

Date: 10/31/2019 7:02:00 PM

Romantic write....to have that kind of love is to be truly blessed....sounds like soul mates to me....love this...may that love never run dry! hugs

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/31/2019 1:23:00 PM

May married couples stay in that honeymoon stage throughout their marriage! (Why not?!). Just have to keep that honey flowing. :) Nice romantic write, Alexis! Warm wishes, Gershon

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/31/2019 9:58:00 AM

This is insanely romantic my friend.

Caycay Jennings

Date: 10/30/2019 8:17:00 PM

Oh, so romantic. I don't know if I want to slow dance after reading it or embrace in candlelight or both, but I surely wanna get my romance on. A mood setter, that's what you are with this one. Now, if only you matched all the readers up. I'm kidding you because if I don't laugh I won't shake the romantic urge that is your fault! Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Winged Warrior

Date: 10/30/2019 9:28:00 AM

You take our breath away, Alexis...no one sweeter than you, my poetic sis...sending warm hugs...^WW^ :o)

Winged Warrior
Date: 10/30/2019 5:27:00 PM

I wish I could see your smile my friend...:o)

Alexis Y.
Date: 10/30/2019 9:42:00 AM

WoW! WW, I think this is the best comment I've gotten on the soup( it's a least in the top 5 for sure). Thanks bro, you have made day. You should see my big smile. Have fantastic day:-) Alexis

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 10/28/2019 11:32:00 AM

I agree wholeheartedly w/Chris, this is such a beautiful poem, Alexis! An instant fave. I LOVE everything about this poem. You superstar pen heart shines brightly, dear friend. Love and more love always.

Alexis Y.
Date: 10/30/2019 9:45:00 AM

WoW! Freddie, I really have missed your encouraging comments. Your support means a lot to me my dear friend. Thanks for faving me. Have a wonderful day my friend:-) Alexis

Chris Green

Date: 10/28/2019 11:29:00 AM

Your beautiful poem of love and affection takes my breath away my friend. This was wonderful Alexis

Alexis Y.
Date: 10/31/2019 10:47:00 AM

Hi Chris, Thanks for such a lovely comment. It means a lot to me. I really appreciate your continued support. Have a fantastic day my friend:-) Alexis