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You Shine Your Light

You shine your light in darkest night
Your beacon burning there so clear
If I had wings then I’d take flight 
You shine your light in darkest night 
I feel your warmth holding me tight 
As in your arms you draw me near 
You shine your light in darkest night
Your beacon burning there so clear

Written by Brenda Meier-Hans 
09.24.2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 9/26/2014 10:42:00 PM
a very nice one and it goes along with that lighthouse theme that was being written about here lately. Good luck in the contest. I see it's filling up fast, so I better get BUSY.
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/27/2014 1:11:00 AM
Thanks Andrea
Date: 9/26/2014 9:35:00 AM
this is the second entry i've seen for this contest, both brilliant,,,,in fact this would be wonderful for nette's lighthouse contest..oh and by the way Brenda just love this amazing poetry....
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/26/2014 10:33:00 AM
Thanks Harry
Date: 9/26/2014 5:42:00 AM
Very romantic and warm poem that makes the heart sing! Beautiful, dear Brenda! Good luck on the contest!
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/26/2014 8:27:00 AM
Thank you Demetrios
Date: 9/25/2014 5:58:00 PM
Just beautiful Brenda! Good luck in the contest my friend!xxxx D.
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/25/2014 6:58:00 PM
Thanks Dorian for your sweet comment.
Date: 9/25/2014 4:38:00 PM
This is dead on. I had to look up "triolet" when I saw it in the contest entries. I read many examples. You did an amazing job. You are a talented poet brenda.
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/25/2014 6:57:00 PM
Ah, Maurice my fellow Canuck. Thank you so much.
Date: 9/25/2014 11:02:00 AM
So soft and lovely.... Hugs Tim
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/25/2014 6:55:00 PM
Thanks Tim. Nice to see you here.
Date: 9/25/2014 9:21:00 AM
JUST FOUND THIS GREAT POEM. I hope it does well. I believe it should do very well myself. Bravooooo!!!
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/25/2014 6:54:00 PM
Thank you Robert. I'm glad you enjoyed reading this.
Date: 9/25/2014 4:49:00 AM
very nice poem lot of feeling,
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/25/2014 7:27:00 AM
Thank you for stopping by Cynthia. I'm glad you enjoyed reading it.
Date: 9/24/2014 4:12:00 PM
Lovely triolet, Brenda! It flows and glows....romantically:) // paul
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/24/2014 9:58:00 PM
Thanks Paul. I'm glad you enjoyed reading it.
Date: 9/24/2014 4:12:00 PM
Brenda, your poetry light is certainly shining with this Gem. What a joy to read, and it'll surely impress in the contest, James...
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/24/2014 9:57:00 PM
Thanks James.
Date: 9/24/2014 1:53:00 PM
beautifully penned and crafted excellent piece
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/24/2014 1:59:00 PM
Thank you Liam.
Date: 9/24/2014 1:36:00 PM
this sways ohh so gently, brenda...your triolet whisked me away!.. huggs
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/24/2014 1:53:00 PM
Thank you so much Nette I'm so glad you enjoyed reading this.
Date: 9/24/2014 12:38:00 PM
beautiful triolet Brenda I may take the plunge and try writing my first one for the contest:-) hugs Jan xxx Good luck in the contest xxx
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 9/24/2014 1:50:00 PM
you can amend entries up until the contest closes i think brenda:-) hugs Jan xxx
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/24/2014 1:35:00 PM
I wrote this on a paper then realized I copied a word wrong on Triolet so I just changed it. Hopefully Alfred didn't read it yet or it's been disqualified already.
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/24/2014 1:29:00 PM
Thanks Jan, and yes go for it. You can do it.