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Love's Magic

Confronting fragile feelings within, pain will inevitably begin. While pride rebuffs attempts to amend the sins you still stubbornly defend. In a world of shakers and takers, trickery breeds liars and fakers. And fledgling spirits, clipped of their wings, attract trouble and the tears it brings. Doubt devastates a heart in despair, letting uncertainty foul the air. And to prove you are not like the rest, you study love, yet you fail each test. Rife with both flattery and deceit, memories are often bittersweet. And blind to the jealousy you bear, lies contort the truth beyond repair. Fear festering in shadow and dream constantly preys on low self-esteem. Truthfully, there's nothing more tragic than a heart bereft of love's magic.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/6/2018 8:35:00 PM
Lovely imagery and rhythm. I particularly love "although it held little weight it crushed your heart". Well done, Emile.
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Date: 3/7/2018 8:59:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/24/2015 10:28:00 PM
Wonderful work, Emile. How simple, but true....only need believe in ourselves.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/25/2015 7:34:00 AM
Thanks David, I appreciate your input. Emile.
Date: 3/24/2015 4:18:00 PM
time to move on from the pain of the past - wonderful imagery Emile - i love the positivity final stanza:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 3/24/2015 5:11:00 PM
I had a break from soup for about 5 days Emile:-) Hugs jan xx
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/24/2015 5:08:00 PM
Thanks Jan, all your visits are treasured. Emile.
Date: 3/24/2015 3:57:00 PM
This really spoke to my heart, Emile. Very uplifting and wise thoughts! Hugs, Kimberly
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/24/2015 5:16:00 PM
Thanks Kimberly, you are always so generous with your praise. Emile.
Date: 3/24/2015 12:41:00 PM
Lovely, it almost looks like you've been reading my poetic diary from before I met my husband. Oh the stubborn heart that won't look forward! but eventually it does and with it another and maybe even better love. Faving this just so I can come back from time to time. ~jan
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/24/2015 5:18:00 PM
Thanks so much Jan, you have such a warm loving heart. Emile.

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